Ode To Mrs Miller

I did not know how brave 
she was, ninety-two, 
and I, seventy less...
so young that old age 
was textbook stuff: 
a fact of life, but not mine.

I was alive and free 
to stride the world, 
a colossus of youth--
whereas she had ate 
almost a century: 
and all her friends
and all her family 
lay dead somewhere, 
except in her mind,
still crisp, poignant 
in its memories... 
of a wealthy husband,
a daughter dead young,
her own youth and her
beauty remaining lonely 
in a silver-framed photo.

She never complained, 
this old lady--never once 
did I hear lamentations, 
a bewailing for the lost 
richness of life: 
that ripe fullness 
she must have once felt 
as a wife, a mother, 
a woman of grace and beauty, 
a living queen in her time.

Now she lived alone in a cold 
basement flat, standing barely 
five feet tall--yet I've never known 
any being braver. But it is only now,
when I am become old myself, 
that I envy such courage.


[rec'd n/a in Brian Strand's #2 contest, judged 6/29/20]
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Mcintosh Avatar
April 28, 2024 at 2:10 PM
Awesome writing. A joy to read - I've known a few like her. God bless you and congrats, love, Gina
Carber Avatar
April 28, 2024 at 2:42 PM
Thanks Gina-- some people live with us forever
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April 25, 2024 at 8:49 AM
oh, and congrats on your win!
Dietrich Avatar
April 25, 2024 at 8:48 AM
wow, this is simply AMAZING. My mom was Mrs. Miller until she remarried a Hulen!!! FAVE poem for me
Carber Avatar
April 28, 2024 at 2:41 PM
Thanks Andrea
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April 25, 2024 at 6:13 AM
I’m starting to feel this (and dread it): and all her friends and all her family lay dead somewhere, except in her mind…love the analysis at the end. I realize now what my grandmothers felt! Bless you! Congratulations, L. J.!
Carber Avatar
April 28, 2024 at 2:41 PM
Thanks Kim--of course, no one really ever dies, just the body until we get to meet again...
Kendrick Avatar
January 16, 2023 at 3:19 AM
Congratulations on this winning work. Way to go. Sara
Carber Avatar
January 16, 2023 at 7:23 AM
Thanks Sara--happy 2023!!!
Fowler Avatar
January 15, 2023 at 8:36 AM
Mrs Miller is indeed a brave woman. As they say, getting old ain't for sissies. I love those brave who never complain or whine. True grit. You've done Mrs Miller a service with your fine write. Congratulations on your win! :)
Carber Avatar
January 16, 2023 at 7:25 AM
Thanks Linda, but Mrs. Miller has been in heaven for a long time--I knew her when I was young and now I'm an old man--alas!
Kauffman Avatar
March 25, 2021 at 9:42 AM
LJ, back with congratulations again on this wonderful story in poetry. So happy to see it on the winners list again! It is very special. Hope you are well. Sending you blessings of joy.
Carber Avatar
March 26, 2021 at 1:04 PM
Thanks Sam-- always very good to hear from you--vaya con Dios, mi amiga
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March 24, 2021 at 2:36 PM
I enjoyed your poem, L.J.! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
Carber Avatar
March 25, 2021 at 8:26 AM
Thanks Kim
Gauthier Avatar
December 11, 2020 at 1:27 PM
Lovely, Nolo ~
Carber Avatar
December 12, 2020 at 9:51 AM
Thanks Line--she was a great lady!
Mishra Avatar
July 7, 2020 at 1:41 PM
I'd loved it when I read it for the first time. Glad to visit it again and congratulate you on another win for this one :)
Carber Avatar
July 8, 2020 at 1:09 PM
Thank you Aditi, much appreciated!
Kauffman Avatar
July 6, 2020 at 3:18 PM
Have loved this from the time I first read it. You have such a wonderful ability to tell a story in verse drawing us into its depths and subtle meanings! They always warm the "cockles" of my heart! Congratulations my friend. Blessings to you!
Carber Avatar
July 7, 2020 at 12:37 PM
Thanks Sam [I'm blushing again!]
Hamilton Avatar
July 6, 2020 at 1:44 PM
Nice write L.J I feel this one, congrats on a nice placement!
Carber Avatar
July 7, 2020 at 12:36 PM
Thank you, John
Mishra Avatar
May 17, 2020 at 9:08 AM
I hope the courage of people like Mrs. Miller keeps our spirit up in old age. Congratulations. This is a beautiful one :)
Carber Avatar
May 17, 2020 at 5:23 PM
Thank you, Aditi--that is my hope as well!
One Avatar
May 17, 2020 at 8:13 AM
WE always learn for our elders... Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Carber Avatar
May 17, 2020 at 5:25 PM
Thank you, Silent One, but I'm not sure how many young Americans look to the old anymore for guidance-- at least it seems not any of my 17 nephews and nieces.
Chiri Avatar
January 26, 2020 at 4:54 AM
LJ congrats on a wonderful top win!;)
Carber Avatar
January 26, 2020 at 12:57 PM
Thanks Brenda!
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January 25, 2020 at 7:13 PM
Have always loved this poem and its wonderfully stated theme honoring Mrs. Miller. Congratulations! PS - a cockle is like a small clam living in sandy beaches! Yum!!!!
Carber Avatar
January 26, 2020 at 1:01 PM
Thanks my friend [ so that's what cockles are-- that explains why they jump around in my heart when I see a beautiful woman go by--oops, is that not PC? I'm getting so old I forget it's verbotten to give a compliment anymore.]
Kauffman Avatar
January 20, 2020 at 2:12 PM
Hi L.J. Congratulations on your second place with this vivid poem. Strong, BEAUTIFUL imagery! "beauty remaining lonely. Really nice work!
Carber Avatar
January 20, 2020 at 6:32 PM
Thank you Sam-- from a poet of your skill, that warms the cockles of my heart --whatever cockles are.
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January 20, 2020 at 1:18 PM
I appreciate the way this woman never complained, L.J. She must have been a member of the “Greatest Generation” – a great book of inspiration and praise. It seems we have forgotten all they taught us about dealing with hardship while retaining dignity. )In line four, it should be "have eaten.") Great ode. Congratulations on a second place in the contest! Best wishes, Carolyn
Carber Avatar
January 20, 2020 at 6:29 PM
Actually Carolyn, she was in her 90's when I knew her, and I, my early 20' [50 years ago!] So she was a lady of the 19th century! I welcome all proofreading [ God knows my old brain needs it], but 'ate' is poetic license--I wanted to give it more force than 'has eaten',to jar the reader a bit.
Awtry Avatar
March 21, 2019 at 8:09 PM
The wisdom and grace we lose when a generation passes... well done. Congratulations!
Carber Avatar
March 22, 2019 at 8:46 AM
Thank you, it is much appreciated.
Toney Avatar
March 21, 2019 at 7:13 PM
Len, what a lovely tribute to "Mrs Miller." As we grow older, life's insistence can be on troublesome and hurtful things. The strength of character of older ones such as "Mrs Miller" is worthy of praise and imitation. Congratulations on your win on Mile 25 of my 2019 Poetry Marathon Contest. Only 2 contests to go before the final! ~Mark
Carber Avatar
March 22, 2019 at 8:47 AM
Thank you, Mark, for the honor.
Vinson Avatar
January 6, 2017 at 11:58 AM
Len, right on - (and write on!) - so real and so true. The courage of some old people, when life indeed becomes harder in ways. You are correct - as we get older we start thinking about such things.
Carber Avatar
January 6, 2017 at 1:25 PM
Thanks Doug, I appreciate it.
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January 6, 2017 at 7:56 AM
Beautiful, Len. Congrats on your win.
Carber Avatar
January 6, 2017 at 1:25 PM
Thank you, Agnes
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