Ode To Mrs Miller

I did not know how brave 
she was, ninety-two, 
and I, seventy less...
so young that old age 
was textbook stuff: 
a fact of life, but not mine.

I was alive and free 
to stride the world, 
a colossus of youth--
whereas she had ate 
almost a century: 
and all her friends
and all her family 
lay dead somewhere, 
except in her mind,
still crisp, poignant 
in its memories... 
of a wealthy husband,
a daughter dead young,
her own youth and her
beauty remaining lonely 
in a silver-framed photo.

She never complained, 
this old lady--never once 
did I hear lamentations, 
a bewailing for the lost 
richness of life: 
that ripe fullness 
she must have once felt 
as a wife, a mother, 
a woman of grace and beauty, 
a living queen in her time.

Now she lived alone in a cold 
basement flat, standing barely 
five feet tall--yet I've never known 
any being braver. But it is only now,
when I am become old myself, 
that I envy such courage.


[rec'd n/a in Brian Strand's #2 contest, judged 6/29/20]
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Date: 4/28/2024 2:10:00 PM
Awesome writing. A joy to read - I've known a few like her. God bless you and congrats, love, Gina
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L. J. Carber
Date: 4/28/2024 2:42:00 PM
Thanks Gina-- some people live with us forever
Date: 4/25/2024 8:49:00 AM
oh, and congrats on your win!
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Date: 4/25/2024 8:48:00 AM
wow, this is simply AMAZING. My mom was Mrs. Miller until she remarried a Hulen!!! FAVE poem for me
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L. J. Carber
Date: 4/28/2024 2:41:00 PM
Thanks Andrea
Date: 4/25/2024 6:13:00 AM
I’m starting to feel this (and dread it): and all her friends and all her family lay dead somewhere, except in her mind…love the analysis at the end. I realize now what my grandmothers felt! Bless you! Congratulations, L. J.!
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L. J. Carber
Date: 4/28/2024 2:41:00 PM
Thanks Kim--of course, no one really ever dies, just the body until we get to meet again...
Date: 1/16/2023 3:19:00 AM
Congratulations on this winning work. Way to go. Sara
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L. J. Carber
Date: 1/16/2023 7:23:00 AM
Thanks Sara--happy 2023!!!
Date: 1/15/2023 8:36:00 AM
Mrs Miller is indeed a brave woman. As they say, getting old ain't for sissies. I love those brave who never complain or whine. True grit. You've done Mrs Miller a service with your fine write. Congratulations on your win! :)
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L. J. Carber
Date: 1/16/2023 7:25:00 AM
Thanks Linda, but Mrs. Miller has been in heaven for a long time--I knew her when I was young and now I'm an old man--alas!
Date: 3/25/2021 9:42:00 AM
LJ, back with congratulations again on this wonderful story in poetry. So happy to see it on the winners list again! It is very special. Hope you are well. Sending you blessings of joy.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 3/26/2021 1:04:00 PM
Thanks Sam-- always very good to hear from you--vaya con Dios, mi amiga
Date: 3/24/2021 2:36:00 PM
I enjoyed your poem, L.J.! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
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L. J. Carber
Date: 3/25/2021 8:26:00 AM
Thanks Kim
Date: 12/11/2020 1:27:00 PM
Lovely, Nolo ~
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L. J. Carber
Date: 12/12/2020 9:51:00 AM
Thanks Line--she was a great lady!
Date: 7/7/2020 1:41:00 PM
I'd loved it when I read it for the first time. Glad to visit it again and congratulate you on another win for this one :)
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L. J. Carber
Date: 7/8/2020 1:09:00 PM
Thank you Aditi, much appreciated!
Date: 7/6/2020 3:18:00 PM
Have loved this from the time I first read it. You have such a wonderful ability to tell a story in verse drawing us into its depths and subtle meanings! They always warm the "cockles" of my heart! Congratulations my friend. Blessings to you!
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L. J. Carber
Date: 7/7/2020 12:37:00 PM
Thanks Sam [I'm blushing again!]
Date: 7/6/2020 1:44:00 PM
Nice write L.J I feel this one, congrats on a nice placement!
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L. J. Carber
Date: 7/7/2020 12:36:00 PM
Thank you, John
Date: 5/17/2020 9:08:00 AM
I hope the courage of people like Mrs. Miller keeps our spirit up in old age. Congratulations. This is a beautiful one :)
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L. J. Carber
Date: 5/17/2020 5:23:00 PM
Thank you, Aditi--that is my hope as well!
Date: 5/17/2020 8:13:00 AM
WE always learn for our elders... Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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L. J. Carber
Date: 5/17/2020 5:25:00 PM
Thank you, Silent One, but I'm not sure how many young Americans look to the old anymore for guidance-- at least it seems not any of my 17 nephews and nieces.
Date: 1/26/2020 4:54:00 AM
LJ congrats on a wonderful top win!;)
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L. J. Carber
Date: 1/26/2020 12:57:00 PM
Thanks Brenda!
Date: 1/25/2020 7:13:00 PM
Have always loved this poem and its wonderfully stated theme honoring Mrs. Miller. Congratulations! PS - a cockle is like a small clam living in sandy beaches! Yum!!!!
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L. J. Carber
Date: 1/26/2020 1:01:00 PM
Thanks my friend [ so that's what cockles are-- that explains why they jump around in my heart when I see a beautiful woman go by--oops, is that not PC? I'm getting so old I forget it's verbotten to give a compliment anymore.]
Date: 1/20/2020 2:12:00 PM
Hi L.J. Congratulations on your second place with this vivid poem. Strong, BEAUTIFUL imagery! "beauty remaining lonely. Really nice work!
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L. J. Carber
Date: 1/20/2020 6:32:00 PM
Thank you Sam-- from a poet of your skill, that warms the cockles of my heart --whatever cockles are.
Date: 1/20/2020 1:18:00 PM
I appreciate the way this woman never complained, L.J. She must have been a member of the “Greatest Generation” – a great book of inspiration and praise. It seems we have forgotten all they taught us about dealing with hardship while retaining dignity. )In line four, it should be "have eaten.") Great ode. Congratulations on a second place in the contest! Best wishes, Carolyn
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L. J. Carber
Date: 1/20/2020 6:29:00 PM
Actually Carolyn, she was in her 90's when I knew her, and I, my early 20' [50 years ago!] So she was a lady of the 19th century! I welcome all proofreading [ God knows my old brain needs it], but 'ate' is poetic license--I wanted to give it more force than 'has eaten',to jar the reader a bit.
Date: 3/21/2019 8:09:00 PM
The wisdom and grace we lose when a generation passes... well done. Congratulations!
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L. J. Carber
Date: 3/22/2019 8:46:00 AM
Thank you, it is much appreciated.
Date: 3/21/2019 7:13:00 PM
Len, what a lovely tribute to "Mrs Miller." As we grow older, life's insistence can be on troublesome and hurtful things. The strength of character of older ones such as "Mrs Miller" is worthy of praise and imitation. Congratulations on your win on Mile 25 of my 2019 Poetry Marathon Contest. Only 2 contests to go before the final! ~Mark
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L. J. Carber
Date: 3/22/2019 8:47:00 AM
Thank you, Mark, for the honor.
Date: 1/6/2017 11:58:00 AM
Len, right on - (and write on!) - so real and so true. The courage of some old people, when life indeed becomes harder in ways. You are correct - as we get older we start thinking about such things.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 1/6/2017 1:25:00 PM
Thanks Doug, I appreciate it.
Date: 1/6/2017 7:56:00 AM
Beautiful, Len. Congrats on your win.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 1/6/2017 1:25:00 PM
Thank you, Agnes
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