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Ode To An Orphan Outcast

A tiny runt who cannot run, mom kicked me out because I limp. The big dogs call me dumb, a gimp, off-beat orphan, claimed by no one. A Mowgli bumming all around, Where is that warmer welcome mat? there sits Bagheera, mama cat; a foundling's hope perhaps is found. She takes me in with her own kits; they share and care for me at last. Not long and I forget my past; my name escapes the dog obits. October 5, 2020 Sponsor: nette onclaud Contest: In Praise of the Ode Theme: # 3. About an Orphan

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Date: 10/19/2020 8:21:00 PM
Nicely written, Reason. I enjoyed the imagery and the rhyme scheme. Also loved the nod to Jungle Book. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 10/16/2020 6:57:00 PM
this is so sweet. Glad I could see it tonight. Congrats on the win
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Date: 10/16/2020 12:12:00 PM
Reason, congratulations on your win! Such a sad beginning with such a happy ending. Love the Jungle Book references. Perfect!
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Date: 10/16/2020 5:52:00 AM
So sweet Reason. Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Date: 10/5/2020 6:28:00 AM
Nice one for this contest..
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Date: 10/5/2020 5:17:00 PM
Cheers, Silent One, appreciate your supportive comment.

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