October Rain

the Maples red is shrouded
in a purplish chill
her stinging cheeks
cold slapped by icy rain
she droops beneath
a pelting fall refrain

the robins wings
hang wet
in trench coat slump
her lowered head
resigned
to time and fate
holds still
preserving warmth’s
forever wait

old dogs
follow masters
memory trails
around the bend
slow past
long rusted rails
for time
alters morning
into night
as two
forever shadows
drift from sight

children splash in puddles
as they run
catching Autumn raindrops
on their tongue
chased by parents
drawn into the fray
by youthful pleas of:
“Let’s go out and play!”


John G. Lawless
©10/27/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Warrior Avatar
October 29, 2018 at 8:08 AM
Well crafted my friend...I was transported for while...hard to do...love & light...^WW^
Ashley Avatar
October 28, 2018 at 7:44 PM
Your beautiful imagery comes to life in the wet of October rain, John. Wondrous writing! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Dietrich Avatar
October 28, 2018 at 2:45 PM
absolutely beautifully described. One of your loveliest poems.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
October 28, 2018 at 10:25 AM
I can see the robin, in trench coat slump. Wonderful write, all of it. xomo
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