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dancing leaves destined to be floating through the air snappish lively winds
Creative Haiku Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Charlotte Puddifoot Written on September 19, 2014

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Date: 9/28/2014 8:45:00 PM
Feel the crisp air. Congrats.
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Date: 9/28/2014 8:05:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Regina
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Date: 9/28/2014 12:31:00 AM
So awesome Regina! I love ur haiku n the autumn! Congrats on fine win!
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Date: 9/27/2014 10:11:00 PM
I remember this one and how much i loved the snappish part. It really made the poem POP. Congrats.
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Date: 9/27/2014 7:29:00 PM
Lovely Haiku, Regina -- congratulations! Sandra
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Date: 9/27/2014 6:08:00 PM
a lovely autumnal one here, very apt for this time of year! good alliteration in the first line, and you got a good strong cut in the third line, too - congrats on your win in my contest :)
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Date: 9/27/2014 5:49:00 PM
The season of the leaves...congrats :)
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Date: 9/27/2014 5:30:00 PM
Excellent. Congratulations on another great write, Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 9/27/2014 5:11:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Regina:-) hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 9/20/2014 10:01:00 PM
Divinely autumn like!!! COOL third line!!!
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Date: 9/19/2014 3:05:00 AM
- A lovely haiku, Regina ! - Luck in contest! - Happy weekend :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/19/2014 2:08:00 AM
lovely haiku Regina I love the imagery:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/19/2014 1:41:00 AM
Nice use of alliteration, and imagery, good luck, Gina
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