October 31

HELLO ; my voice faintly echoes back Hello
Is anyone there? Can anyone hear me?
I stare into the thick ebony chilly mist
Seeing nothing but the dance of Satan's Demons
Grotesque, disfigured lost souls living in their created darkness
Hell's home for all of mankinds lost sinners
As ghastly faces of the past and present pass through me
The haggard grim eyes of my youth pierce my black Heart
This sleleton of a endless Eternity embraces my soul
Come fly with me in the emptiness of Forever
Watch as you vacuously become a leader among us
We applaud how well you carry the sins of your life
You are a distinguished minion of all that is Evil
Grab Your heavy iron chains of sin and ascend to Your throne

I awake in my bed , in my cabin , my soul intact--- November 1


Happy Halloween to all my Soup Family
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Breidenthal Avatar
April 30, 2012 at 4:28 PM
Awesome poem!!! Really enjoyed this spooky one. Always, Laura
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February 14, 2010 at 8:39 PM
i wonder, if you are referring to a hidden meaning that relates to your life in here. mystery is one of my favorites.i A-D-O-R-E your poetry & the way you sound when i read it. and take your time on the poem, theres no rush.have a blissful night, & vagrant, but peaceful dreams my friend. -Always Lynn
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November 27, 2009 at 6:07 PM
Mysterious and deep HG and I so enjoyed this poem of yours... interesting write.. u are a darling to write such beautiful sentiments to me regarding my poetry.. I am happy u enjoyed and were touched.. my parents meant the world to me.. a major part of who I am today as a woman.. more insight? read.. ... when Christopher went Home.. u will enjoy... keep well and blessings and luv tonight.. sweet dreams.. Linda-Marie "Sweetie"
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November 25, 2009 at 5:59 PM
Man have you got some awesome lines in this one ! I think this is an amazing write. Very well done. there is only one little thing I see that is wrong with it , if you don;t mind my saying it. ...and that is ...... that I myself didn't write it! : ) Robert
Freeman Avatar
October 27, 2009 at 7:54 AM
Quite unique HG. Good Job, My friend. Sincerely. Moses
Gass Avatar
October 16, 2009 at 5:35 PM
Awesome piece, HG! Deep and thought provoking, it gives you a lot to ponder and "raises the hairs on the back of your neck" scary! A delightful, frightful read, my dear friend! Happy Halloween! Love and best wishes, Robin
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October 15, 2009 at 5:11 AM
Happy Halloween to you HG my forever friend. This is going to my Favs. Love, Carol
Richards Avatar
October 14, 2009 at 5:58 PM
OOOOHHH....yes....a bit on the dark side of our gifted poet friend!! Great Job!! ~ Carrie....Is that a howl I hear??
Gorelick Avatar
October 14, 2009 at 3:05 PM
ooowww....scarey..Im going to straighten right up from now on! Havnet gotten around to writing my scarey poem..maybe Ill feed off of yours...those heavy iron chains and the throne got to me. Love you HG..BG
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