October 31

HELLO ; my voice faintly echoes back Hello Is anyone there? Can anyone hear me? I stare into the thick ebony chilly mist Seeing nothing but the dance of Satan's Demons Grotesque, disfigured lost souls living in their created darkness Hell's home for all of mankinds lost sinners As ghastly faces of the past and present pass through me The haggard grim eyes of my youth pierce my black Heart This sleleton of a endless Eternity embraces my soul Come fly with me in the emptiness of Forever Watch as you vacuously become a leader among us We applaud how well you carry the sins of your life You are a distinguished minion of all that is Evil Grab Your heavy iron chains of sin and ascend to Your throne I awake in my bed , in my cabin , my soul intact--- November 1 Happy Halloween to all my Soup Family

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Laura Breidenthal

Date: 4/30/2012 4:28:00 PM

Awesome poem!!! Really enjoyed this spooky one. Always, Laura

Lynette Chachere

Date: 2/14/2010 8:39:00 PM

i wonder, if you are referring to a hidden meaning that relates to your life in here. mystery is one of my favorites.i A-D-O-R-E your poetry & the way you sound when i read it. and take your time on the poem, theres no rush.have a blissful night, & vagrant, but peaceful dreams my friend. -Always Lynn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/27/2009 6:07:00 PM

Mysterious and deep HG and I so enjoyed this poem of yours... interesting write.. u are a darling to write such beautiful sentiments to me regarding my poetry.. I am happy u enjoyed and were touched.. my parents meant the world to me.. a major part of who I am today as a woman.. more insight? read.. ... when Christopher went Home.. u will enjoy... keep well and blessings and luv tonight.. sweet dreams.. Linda-Marie "Sweetie"

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 11/25/2009 5:59:00 PM

Man have you got some awesome lines in this one ! I think this is an amazing write. Very well done. there is only one little thing I see that is wrong with it , if you don;t mind my saying it. ...and that is ...... that I myself didn't write it! : ) Robert

John Freeman

Date: 10/27/2009 7:54:00 AM

Quite unique HG. Good Job, My friend. Sincerely. Moses

Robin L. Gass

Date: 10/16/2009 5:35:00 PM

Awesome piece, HG! Deep and thought provoking, it gives you a lot to ponder and "raises the hairs on the back of your neck" scary! A delightful, frightful read, my dear friend! Happy Halloween! Love and best wishes, Robin

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/15/2009 5:11:00 AM

Happy Halloween to you HG my forever friend. This is going to my Favs. Love, Carol

Carrie Richards

Date: 10/14/2009 5:58:00 PM

OOOOHHH....yes....a bit on the dark side of our gifted poet friend!! Great Job!! ~ Carrie....Is that a howl I hear??

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 10/14/2009 3:05:00 PM

ooowww....scarey..Im going to straighten right up from now on! Havnet gotten around to writing my scarey poem..maybe Ill feed off of yours...those heavy iron chains and the throne got to me. Love you HG..BG