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Written, October 18, 2023
For The Contest, “October's Story - Kyrielle”
Sponsor, Regina McIntosh

Our summer ended its grand stay, and verdant leaves will soon display a red and orange burnished hue. October, how we welcome you. And one by one, in cool, crisp air they swirl and whirl to fall with flare as leafy quilts make their debut. October, how we welcome you. Your autumn brush paints flower art, while bright, bold colors warm the heart- as Marigold and Mum will do. October, how we welcome you. Dull atmosphere, you somehow cleanse; as pure, dry air improves our lens makes scenes more vivid- skies, more blue. October, how we welcome you. But, best of all, your harvest time of orchard fruits- crisp apples, prime; close gatherings at bonfires too! October, how we welcome you.

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Date: 11/20/2023 6:47:00 AM
Love it Sandra. All the best of October...especially "vivd scenes" and the "bonfires"! Lovely imagery. Congratulations! :)
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Date: 11/19/2023 9:05:00 PM
So beautiful. Congratulations and many prayers for this upcoming season... thanksgiving and Christmas. Love, Gina
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Date: 11/19/2023 6:12:00 PM
Dear Sandra, a beautifully composed Kyrielle. Your imagery, rhythm and rhymes portray the splendor of October with Fall flare and poetic flair. Congratulations for your win in Gina's contest. Warmest wishes for a happy Thanksgiving.. ~Susan
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Date: 11/19/2023 3:39:00 PM
Sandra, this is such a lovely poem. CONGRATS on your well-deserved win. Janice
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