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Ocean Waves

white capped ocean waves bring soothing to my soul echoes in a shell Heidi Sands 1/27/19

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 1/31/2019 5:33:00 PM

Hello Heidi,I like the way you wrote about the ocean. The water is so soothing got the soul. Have a nice evening my friend.

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/31/2019 6:46:00 PM

Thank you . I hope you have a nice evening as well :)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 1/31/2019 5:30:00 PM

Hello Heidi, for my first try,I have notice The first word Ball was off to the right. I gave it a shot , and i will try again. So when I do another, it will be better. I am proud of my first try. This makes me happy. The next one will be better. Have a nice day my friend.

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/31/2019 6:46:00 PM

That's great to hear Darlene! I love your poetry :)

Sandra L. Weiss

Date: 1/30/2019 7:53:00 PM

Lovely Haiku. Waves do soothe the soul.

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/30/2019 8:06:00 PM

Thank you Sandy :)

Mike Hauser

Date: 1/29/2019 12:05:00 PM

Winner, Winner ... Chicken dinner!

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/29/2019 12:21:00 PM

LOL! Thank you Mike :)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/29/2019 4:06:00 AM

I read this, and my whole body took a deep breath, letting air out slowly on a sigh fit for the ocean and this haiku, Heidi.

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/29/2019 4:27:00 AM

That is nice to hear Caren! Thank you :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/28/2019 12:28:00 PM

- Beautiful ... I always pick shells and stones on the beach, Heidi :) - Luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/28/2019 3:04:00 PM

Thank you Anne-Lise :)

Mike Gentile

Date: 1/28/2019 9:00:00 AM

Heidi, your haiku is also soothing . The picture of serenity, Good Luck Happy Monday xxoo

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/28/2019 9:14:00 AM

Hi Mike. Thank you. I am happy to hear this is soothing ! Happy Monday :)

Vladislav Raven

Date: 1/28/2019 8:37:00 AM

Hi Heidi, I do love the Haiku form, I love the content of your Haiku, it brings peace to the soul. A fave. Have a wonderful Monday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/28/2019 9:12:00 AM

Thank you so much Mike. I am happy it brings peace to the soul :) Have a great Monday :)