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Ocean Is the Mirror

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wandering ship scintillating moon ocean the mirror ripples hushed night clouds float like dreams FIRST PLACE July 6, 2021 For "Picture This 2 - 7 Lines" Poetry Contest Sponsor: Joseph May Strand - 1054 Poetry Contest Sponsor: Brian Strand

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Barbara Peckham

Date: 8/4/2021 11:47:00 AM

Lovely poem. Great picture formed with words. Thank you for sharing.

Jan Allison

Date: 7/18/2021 4:47:00 PM

beautifully penned, many congrats on your win Mala:-) hugs Jan xx

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/18/2021 5:07:00 PM

Thanks, Jan. Glad you liked it. Love ~ Mala

Joseph May

Date: 7/14/2021 6:37:00 AM

Very nicely penned Malabika, Congrats on your win

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/14/2021 6:47:00 AM

Thanks, Joseph. I am so honoured. BW ~ Mala

Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/12/2021 7:28:00 PM

Like dream. Beautiful Work. Congratulations!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/8/2021 5:28:00 PM

Such a lovely image painted in so few words. So much said and implied. Lovely, Mala! ~ gw

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/7/2021 9:19:00 AM

Your words come alive with the picture. Good Luck. Have a blessed day writing away.................

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/7/2021 9:20:00 AM

Thank you, Paula. Your thoughtful words mean a lot. Love and blessings - Mala

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/6/2021 11:32:00 AM

- A lovely poem, Mala :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/6/2021 3:37:00 PM

Thanks, Anne-Lise. Yours is perfect! Love ~ Mala

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 7/6/2021 11:31:00 AM

Hello Mala, ships on the ocean waters, watching the clouds float. i can picture it. love & Friendship.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/6/2021 3:51:00 PM

Hello Mala, this is a beautiful poem you created. Hugs Love & Friendship.

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/6/2021 3:36:00 PM

Thanks, Darlene. Trying to capture the picture with words. Love ~ Mala