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Ocean Feelings

Infinite footprints in the sand, so grand, Where they journey, day and night, across the land? Why not we pause, in this soft, sun-kissed bed, And resurrect our love, where it was once widespread. Draw near, take my hand, let our spirits expand, In the ocean's embrace, let our love withstand, With clasped hands, our passion shall advance, Reviving ancient love, in a timeless dance. Shall we craft our dreams in the sandy strand? Savor moments, listening to the waves' sweet band, Why not we witness waves' endless rapport? Eternal tango of waves and the shore's rapport. Shall I sculpt you in the soft, yielding sand? Perhaps the waves will pause, this art so grand, Our hearts aglow in the sunset's warm hue, In night's absence, waves play a love song anew.

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Date: 9/18/2023 6:37:00 AM
Beautiful rhythm and rhymes, love how you’ve written this. So many lines stood out for me. Especially “ perhaps the waves will pause..” love that. Thank you for writing and congratulations
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Date: 9/16/2023 5:46:00 AM
Lovely poem ! Very romantic and fervent with overflowing emotions of love in the backdrop of a pleasant setting. Your heart's song merges with the sibilance of the ocean.
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Date: 9/15/2023 8:24:00 AM
Well done Jay, This is an excellent poem. I didn't want it to end. Very engrossing. Your poetry is of a high caliber. Cheers sv
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Date: 9/15/2023 5:57:00 AM
Jay, Your Ocean's Feelings poem is like a romantic symphony, filled with vivid imagery that takes me back in time, delicately weaving dreams and memories together.
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Date: 9/14/2023 1:19:00 PM
Beautifully reminiscing---crafting dreams, Jay.
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Date: 9/14/2023 11:42:00 AM
Great imagery, Jay. Your Ocean's Feelings poem is very romantic and engaging, my friend. Thanks for the visit to my poetry. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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