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Ocean

Your words of pain No more in my vein Your crazy acts Are forgotten facts For one day you know In a lovely snow In a silk soft hue You said me I love you In your warm emotion I met an ocean _______________________ 17/10/2016 For poetry contest : A response to the quote “I've learned that people will forget what you said, people will forget what you did, but people will never forget how you made them feel.” - Maya Angelou : sponsored by Silent One

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Date: 10/20/2016 9:02:00 AM
This is so beautiful love love it!!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 10/20/2016 9:20:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 10/18/2016 10:10:00 AM
Lovely personification of an ocean Probir.
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Date: 10/18/2016 12:05:00 PM
Thank you, Paloma ...
Date: 10/18/2016 6:48:00 AM
wonderful. Thank you for commenting on my poem, Words: No More.
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Date: 10/18/2016 12:06:00 PM
Thank you ...
Date: 10/18/2016 5:29:00 AM
The theme almost longer than the poem but not prettier! Beautiful meaningful verses my friend, Probir! Good luck!
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Date: 10/18/2016 5:59:00 AM
Ha ha, such like things do happen ... thank you so much ... a unique comment ...
Date: 10/17/2016 7:43:00 PM
An ocean of dreams fulfilled no doubt. A very good poem, Probir. You are at the top of your game on this one. Nice pennings. Much love, my friend.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 10/18/2016 6:01:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 10/17/2016 9:06:00 AM
Very creative, Probir. I love how you always manage to put nature into your poems.
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Date: 10/17/2016 10:17:00 AM
Thanks ... It comes spontaneously as figure ... Glad that you like it ...
Date: 10/17/2016 6:26:00 AM
Very cool Probir /|\
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Probir Gupta
Date: 10/17/2016 10:19:00 AM
Thank you for the appreciation ...

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