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We are Winkin, Blinkin and Nod. Many years this earth, we have trod. We each had a dream, we three. Winkin first said” my dream came back to me. It was the Pacific Ocean calling to me you see. Discarded plastics relentlessly thrown needlessly. They form a canopy over the sea, stopping the sun. The ocean begged for help, something must be done. In my dream I explained little I could do, I am only one. It’s imperative that its stopped, humans must unite. The world must be shown the damage and my plight. Winkin you must organise groups to join the fight. This matter is urgent, the rubbish is smothering me. Humans, understand I am not a garbage tip for free. I regulate climates, I generate oxygen to breathe. Economies rely on me, what they do to me now I seethe. Blinkin‘s dream was about the Atlantic and she is wild. He said in his dream the Atlantic Ocean had not once smiled. Connected to all other oceans she is leader of the pack. She is demanding the serenity of all the oceans are given back. Angry what we humans are doing to the world. Global warming, destroying the peace of oceans unfurled. Water levels dangerously rising as polar regions slowly decay. Atlantic’s water surface temperature levels are not steadily at bay. Changing global weather patterns, severe weather to the aquatic. The Atlantic is notoriously violent, unpredictable, and chaotic. Sometimes powerful windstorms. like hurricanes form. If the pressure falls rapidly, and conditions are warm. At great speed, waves crashing with maximum power. Making sea passage more dangerous hour by hour. Global warming is what’s making her so sour. Nod said my dream was about the Indian ocean an equally sad dream. The winds over the Indian Ocean are gentle, so it would seem. Nod had to mention swimming in his dream on his honeymoon. In the Maldives in November, water temperature 29°C. it will be again soon. In the southern hemisphere there is wished no-one any harm. A large expanse of sparking water it’s usually calm. But there are areas where waters are rising at an alarming rate. Something must be done says the Indian ocean. We just can’t wait. Cyclones, and monsoons, which can cause rough seas. Are caused by changes of weather and I need help please. The global warming your bad practices did create. Now spells disaster for the oceans of the world, we anticipate. Happy to have related our dreams and what they had in store. Sorry Winkin, Blinkin and Nod can’t stay to tell you more. They must hurry to post this and form a remedial and protest group. With each and every member of a poetry place called Soup.

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Date: 9/18/2023 6:10:00 AM
Dear talented poetess, i was amazed and speechless reading this deeply meaningful poem, you’ve touched so many crucial aspects of ocean in a very creative manner. Its very intriguing and interesting. You write stories on any theme in such impactful manner. And i did notice your maldives reference! Thank you! We are a country with 1000 plus tiny islands almost invisible on the map! Makes me happy to see u mention. And it i also love the ending. How good! Thank u for writing. Congratulations
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Date: 9/18/2023 11:36:00 AM
Oh wow thats amazing, kurumba was very popular back in the day and still is, so good to know you’ve been to maldives. Cheers
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Date: 9/18/2023 9:59:00 AM
My reference was to our honeymoon over fifty years ago. We spent 10 blissful days in the Maldives. The resort was a new exciting place to stay and my biggest memories were the wonderful friendly people and staff at Kurumba and the beautiful warm waters around the tiny island. Thank you for your lovely comment Empress.
Date: 9/18/2023 5:39:00 AM
Dear SV, Back with Hearty congratulations on your amply deserved win with this wonderful poem about the ocean
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Date: 9/18/2023 10:16:00 AM
Thank you my friend. I will be "off air" for a few weeks soon, Jemma and the man she intends to marry are coming for a few weeks. I don't want to miss a second of them being here. Just so you know. Best wishes SV
Date: 9/13/2023 7:09:00 PM
beautiful penning, the message is so precious, the fight only begins, this is a very precious and enlightning poem yann
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Date: 9/13/2023 8:08:00 PM
Yann thank you so much and I agree. To treat our oceans as a dumping ground is inexcusable no matter what the reason. We must stop using plastics, and those products that can be recycled. THEN recycle them. (sorry Yann I got carried away.) Best wishes from SV
Date: 9/13/2023 1:48:00 PM
This should be one for the archives, S.V. a very serious matter. "It’s imperative that its stopped, humans must unite. The world must be shown the damage and my plight.". Bravo, I think Greenpeace flyers! It's a world crisis. Great entry :D
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Date: 9/18/2023 10:20:00 AM
Agreed! Back with congratulations on your win!
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Date: 9/13/2023 8:03:00 PM
So appreciative of your comment Anaya, and so grateful to you for persevering with all 48 lines of this long poem. I pride myself on being brief and concise, but my 3 childhood heroes kind of took over. The 3 fishermen Wynken Blynken and Nod were the subject of nursey rhymes when was a child. Wynken & Blinken are a child's tired eyes, and Nod is the child nodding off to sleep. I thought they would be perfect to deliver the content of such important dreams. If we can do nothing else, lets keep talking about the problem. Maybe some will listen. You are a precious friend, Keep smiling.
Date: 9/13/2023 6:53:00 AM
Your use of diction in this piece is incredibly evocative, with each word carrying a profound weight that reaches into the depths of the reader's mind and soul. Your talent shines brilliantly, as always. This entry for the contest is truly magnificent, as your rhymes are expertly crafted and exquisitely artistic, inspiring us to unite and take action for the preservation of our aquatic ecosystems. Water bodies lament their suffering, and it is clear to bring about improvement. BOL in the contest
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Date: 9/13/2023 11:13:00 AM
Thank you SP. It could have been a lot better, if I possessed your amazing descriptive way with words, displayed in your entry, but I will have to remain satisfied with my own limited capabilities and be appreciative of your heart warming comment. SV
Date: 9/13/2023 3:32:00 AM
This is an urgent need of the hour. People choke rivers and seas with garbage and toxic waste from factories! They do it with no concern about the iminent danger awaiting mankind, leading to global warming and resulting in cyclones and cloud bursts. The oceans and water bodies sigh in pain. United efforts are needed to improve the situation. You have raised a wonderful plea to save the world from drastic catastrophies. A wonderful poem with great rhyming and profundity of thoughts, dear SV
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Date: 9/13/2023 4:56:00 AM
Valsa my lovely friend, thank you for your comment, yes when I think of the ocean I hear her cry, for what we are doing to her. We must realize and teach our children and teach their children to take responsibility and look after the world before we destroy it. Every best wish dear Valsa
Date: 9/12/2023 11:09:00 PM
A very creative and ingenious piece dear SV, I thoroughly loved reading the depth and thoughts you've put into this, while describing the saddening facts in a poetic way, which creates a gloomy amd regretful ambience to read, what we've done to our beautiful oceans and seascapes sigh.. This is an absolutely wonderful take for the contest, as always your rhymes are very well crafted and especially the ending is so artistic which appeals us to come together and do something for our aqua realms..
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Date: 9/12/2023 11:35:00 PM
Sweet Hiya, I failed to achieve what I set out to do, it was beyond me. I planned a poetic piece full of wonderful descriptive verse to enlighten my love for the ocean, while using the three dreams to pinpoint the human foibles putting our oceans in such danger. Beyond me, but the dreams worked and the poetic language, that of a second grader. :( but I tried. ) Thank you for your kind words dear one, I really do appreciate them. Best wishes from SV

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