Obsessiveness

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Doubt and overthinking.
Decisive memory is shared.
Destroy our sensitive psyche.
Diverge goals in the actual world. 
Deadly embrace of neon light.
Distortions were utterly blown.
Despite dares, I'm spotless. 
Don't be afraid, I'll turn the wheel.
Discovers the magic
Distinction shapes the levels. 

Written: July 10, 2022

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Bill Baker

Date: 7/12/2022 8:23:00 AM

This is "D" truth my friend. Dive deep into the discovery of truth by avoiding or dismissing the distractions by seeking guidance from the spotless Light. Insightful, spiriual and engaging poetry, Lasaad. Thanks for sharing yours with us. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Valsa George

Date: 7/11/2022 7:52:00 PM

Doubt and overthinking can destroy or damage our diligence and dent the desirability of our deeds. Dare do things with determination and deep deire.... ! I enjoyed your obsession with 'D' making me also do the same.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 7/11/2022 1:29:00 PM

Obsessive thinking I would say exists in almost every human being to a greater or lesser degree - you state and observe and explain obsessive behavior excellently starting your every sentence with a 'D' Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 7/11/2022 10:28:00 AM

LOL I agree with Vijay. Linda

Vijay Pandit

Date: 7/11/2022 4:21:00 AM

D words on obsessive behavior make the case, Lasaad.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 7/11/2022 2:26:00 AM

Great poem. It makes you think. (Sorry I was sick so I'm late.)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/10/2022 2:32:00 PM

Good one. It is true we can overthink anything. Sometimes we have to go ahead afraid and do something and get it done. Once we start it gets easier. Your visit to my page was delightful. Sara