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Observing the Ripples In the Water

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Against the edge of the pond filled with spring water, that seeps from beneath the earth, I stand embracing untroubled comfort, beneath the cool shade of a tall black willow tree. I close my eyes and inhale the sweet fragrant blooms of marsh marigold, Japanese water iris, and water spider lilies growing along the edge. I Bend down, pick up a pebble and throw it into the pond. In impact a splash, and the resounding plunk, making glimmering ripples spreading over the water. Observing the ripples, wistful thinking about the past, memories of secrets, pain, betrayal, hope, and love that entered my heart. In hand, I held a pebble of my life that was so easily thrown away. 8/24/2017

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Date: 7/5/2018 10:09:00 PM
Wow - beautiful, Eve. A FAVE for me.
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Date: 7/4/2018 1:01:00 PM
Congrats Eve--very nice, feels like an extended haiku almost
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Date: 7/2/2018 8:45:00 PM
Such a beautiful poem, Eve, and the flow of your soothing words bring peace and comfort. Congratulations on your nice placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 7/2/2018 7:43:00 PM
"I stand embracing untroubled comfort" is such a lovely line !! This is a beautiful poem Eve ! Congrats to you!
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Date: 7/2/2018 6:00:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this beautiful poem. Wonderful imagery and thoughtful reflection. Well done!
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Date: 7/2/2018 3:05:00 PM
This is beautiful, Eve. Soupmail.
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Date: 9/15/2017 10:43:00 AM
A joy to read and i love that final line Eve many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/15/2017 10:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Eve. :))
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Date: 9/15/2017 10:06:00 AM
Congratulations for this great poem win Eve :)
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Date: 9/15/2017 6:47:00 AM
Congrats on your win with this introspective poem. I love the "untroubled comfort"; I often feel like this when I sit by the water.
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Date: 9/15/2017 6:04:00 AM
Congrats Eve!
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Date: 9/14/2017 11:35:00 PM
wonderful write, Eve. love the rich use of clear imagery, and action. you definitely show instead of tell! congratulations!
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Date: 9/14/2017 9:29:00 PM
Gorgeous imagery and exquisite phrasing - just love it! Congrats on your win, Eve - blessings! :-) <3
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Date: 8/27/2017 2:11:00 PM
The metaphors and images are lovely. It is so free flowing and graceful. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 8/25/2017 5:48:00 PM
Eve, I absolutely love this!!! One tiny thing, it's written in present tense, but in stanza three with the word "threw" you changed it to past tense. Was that intentional. For me, I am thinking present tense all the way through, but maybe you meant to end in the past? By the way, this is gonna be a FAVE
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Date: 8/25/2017 6:07:00 PM
Thank you, thank you, I didn't notice ,, I changed it... I am tickled you got my back girl ,, Hugs eve
Date: 8/25/2017 10:04:00 AM
Wonderful Eve....love the metaphor
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Date: 8/25/2017 7:55:00 AM
- As always a pleasure to read your beautiful poem, dear Eve - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/25/2017 5:40:00 AM
A lovely poem-love the last line!
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Date: 8/25/2017 1:03:00 AM
Wow! What a marvellous poem, Eve:)
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Date: 8/25/2017 12:54:00 AM
Wow, beautifully penned Eve, ripples, stumbling along life's paths. Wll done, Mark
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