Observations On a Spring Evening

A playful brant swam on the pollen-dabbed lake.

A dipper perched on a dog-wood tree so dazzling and aromatic,
he neither decided to stay nor go although his companions were gone;
he had a white head and gray wings feeling a bit too romantic...
seeking through green branches a lonely warbler hidden in a cosy place,
and there he hoped to confide his dreams while he turned artistic.

A restless bittens
searched the tall, sun-dried reeds 
of a river not so calm...
did she find some food like bluegill,
not to make her stomach growl?
She kept on searching 'till dusk!

A tawhee snoozed on the smallest spruce...
waiting for the evening to fall. 

Written by Andrew Crisci
for Constance La France's contest,
" For ( Four ) Beautiful Birds "
May 12, 2011
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Kendrick Avatar
June 3, 2011 at 3:54 PM
Enjoyed the work..Some birds that are not familiar because I don't think that they are in our area..Congrats..Sara
Gorelick Avatar
June 2, 2011 at 2:17 PM
Some different birds in this one..I like it! Congrats on your win..BG
Maverick Avatar
June 2, 2011 at 2:08 PM
Congratulations on your winning results with this write Andrew,
Dietrich Avatar
June 1, 2011 at 9:15 PM
Gosh, Andrew, some of yours were names of birds I am not sure I know. You must know alot about them. Wonderfully depicted! congrats on your win.
Mehta Avatar
June 1, 2011 at 7:38 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of constance, Andrew
Brown Avatar
June 1, 2011 at 6:14 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Constance's "For (Four) Beautful Birds"contest Andrew. Love, Carol
Onclaud Avatar
May 31, 2011 at 9:20 PM
… raving KUDOS to you for the special win, andrew :) huggs,
La France Avatar
May 31, 2011 at 9:17 PM
Congratulations Andrew on 4th place in my contest with this beautiful poem~~
Sweetheart Avatar
May 31, 2011 at 8:32 PM
Congrats Andrew on your amazing win in four birds contest with this beautiful write and entry my friend.. enjoy with luv..
La France Avatar
May 13, 2011 at 2:37 PM
soup mail in a moment~~
Onclaud Avatar
May 12, 2011 at 2:42 AM
so dreamy with musical flow to this piece, andrew! a sure winning material.. :) huggs, nette
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