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Observation

Sun Lowers Behind trees Making its way To the horizon Where it will cast colors Across sky, water and land Closure comes at the end of day I observe with patience, where I stand Clear skies wait for moon and stars to display Heidi Sands 9/11/20

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Joseph May

Date: 3/19/2024 5:22:00 PM

Sunset casting beautiful colors, Wonderful write Heidi

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/20/2024 10:15:00 AM

I lowered the poem and got it corrected

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/20/2024 7:13:00 AM

Hi Joseph. Thank you. I just edited the poem so the first word sun would line up, but it went back to being unaligned after saved. Not sure why . I appreciate your comment :)

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/12/2020 8:04:00 AM

Ah, to me its the best time of the day, Heidi. Your poem expresses its beauty wonderfully. I hope you're feeling much better and more like yourself. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/12/2020 8:55:00 AM

Thank you very much Susan. Yes, I am home and feeling better, recovering some. I appreciate your kind comment :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/11/2020 11:23:00 PM

Watched it only last night going down over the Aegean sea, that giant gold, then red orb as it said goodnight to the day. Tom

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/12/2020 5:43:00 AM

Wow...that sounds so beautiful Tom. Thanks for sharing. I hope you have a nice day :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/11/2020 3:28:00 PM

Magic happens when sun lowers behind the trees--you captured the moments beautifully, Heidi..awaiting eventide.

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/11/2020 3:49:00 PM

Thank you very much Vijay :) Let there be magic. Have a nice night :)