Obscure Destiny

Father toils in unproductive land
To meet both the ends,
Uneducated, he has no other option
But to cling to the last straw frail
He got from his father.
He now wants to pass it on
To his educated son,
Exposed to the world by TV
Caught in the web of the internet
Who won’t soil his hands 
Drip with sweat the land
For he sees urban dreams in rural eyes
For he carves modern ambition in rustic fingers.
Hope of turning his blue collar into white
Crashes in the concrete of urban discontent 
For the dream job he doesn’t get.
Losing the race in stiff competition
He is broken, stuck in confusion
Between discarded root and denied refuge.
Bereft of the sense of belonging
To the society divided
He turns a destemmed leaf in cross-wind
Rustling aimless to nowhere
Destiny tragically obscure.

April 1, 2018.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Carber Avatar
April 19, 2018 at 8:24 AM
Congrats on your win-- and for reminding those born into advantage that they should be grateful beyond words.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
April 20, 2018 at 1:58 AM
Thank you, L.J. I agree.
Gentry Avatar
April 18, 2018 at 8:07 PM
Congratulations on your win with this hopeful and sorrowful tale of generations. You always touch my heart.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
April 19, 2018 at 12:30 AM
Thank you so much, Susan for your touching comment.
Roper Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 6:19 PM
Congratulation on your win, Subimal.It would be an honor to inherit family property, but when the son or daughter wants a better life is also understandable . Hugs Eve
Sinha-Roy Avatar
April 18, 2018 at 2:59 AM
Thank you, Eve. Yes that is true. But better life is sometimes an illusion.
Haight Avatar
April 16, 2018 at 7:50 PM
Wow, Subimal...what a well-written, powerfully sad message in your eye-opening poem. The young generation of poorer countries caught between two worlds...'the society divided...rustling aimless to nowhere..." I feel the struggle in your words. Congratulations on your 1st place win! Hugs, Sandra
Sinha-Roy Avatar
April 18, 2018 at 2:58 AM
Thank you, Sandra for your thoughtful comments. That is what exactly is happening in many parts of the world.
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