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Oblivious

Through life's struggles we've all fought Yet she stood there not jaded Glowing was her heart so pure The crowds paling by her sides Oblivious to her unorthodox charm Her innocence and grace Standing there as an anomaly She had the warmest smile Submitted on September 21, 2019 for contest PICK A LINE ANY LINE FROM POEM BROKEN PEOPLE (“Through life's struggles we've all fought”) AND MY OWN “SOMEONE SAID HELLO TODAY” (“She had the warmest smile”) sponsored by RICHARD LAMOUREUX - RANKED 4TH

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Date: 10/12/2019 9:27:00 AM
Well done, congrats and thanks for entering my contest.
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Date: 10/9/2019 11:43:00 AM
You wisely quoted the line you used from his poem. Congratulations.
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Date: 10/9/2019 3:18:00 PM
Thanks, Janis, for your much appreciated visit and comment.
Date: 9/21/2019 2:41:00 PM
I love this Line. My best to you in the contest! xomo
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Date: 9/21/2019 7:04:00 PM
Thank you so much, Maureen.
Date: 9/21/2019 8:43:00 AM
Beautiful :-) x
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Date: 9/21/2019 8:45:00 AM
Thanks, Elaine. Much appreciated.

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