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Oblivion

In the dark night, black as obsidian, Her dreams make her reach that oblivion, To where she escapes from her painful past, The sad thing is this world never does last... So she creates 'nother world of her own, With imagination that hits full-blown, Her diaries are filled with thoughts from her heart, And she writes and writes poetry, such art! 09.23.2021 For Constance La France's ""O" contest, New poems only"

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Date: 10/5/2021 7:38:00 AM
Jo, congratulations on your win in my "O" contest with this splendid poem, so perfectly penned, well done ~ love and serenity _Constance
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Date: 9/27/2021 11:02:00 AM
Congratulations Jo! The poet's pen truly creates art out dreams, artistry out of nightmares whether in sleep or reality. So well done. Sending you blessings! Wonderful take on the word "oblivion."
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Date: 9/24/2021 11:36:00 PM
WoW! Jo, You penned a well-written write using the word “ oblivion.” Good content and rhymes. Congratulations on a well-deserved win. Have a good evening and weekend-Alexis
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Date: 9/24/2021 10:47:00 PM
"The sad thing is this world never does last..." True. Beautiful writing. Congratulations!
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Date: 9/24/2021 6:19:00 AM
Lovely writing! “Black as obsidian,” complimented by the second line. Well done, Jo!
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Date: 9/24/2021 5:16:00 AM
Lovely write. Nice way to escape and be happy. Will surely try.
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Date: 9/24/2021 1:24:00 AM
Not for we Christians I'm pleased to say Jo
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Date: 9/23/2021 4:22:00 PM
oh hey, I used that obsidian word too. It immediately came to me as I tried to think of a good O word to begin my acrostic with. Love what you did with Oblivion. Wonderful, Jo
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Date: 9/23/2021 11:15:00 AM
What better conclusion. Loved this poem. Hugs.
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