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a mighty oak tree struck by lightning two years back.... vultures' summer roost

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 7/11/2023 3:15:00 PM
Vultures, like ALL creatures great and small (and the oak tree I might add) have a purpose under God's creation as do we all. Creation/nature is a manifestation of God's love. And so is this poem!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/12/2023 2:14:00 AM
Why, thank you, Terrell. Your comments added a special touch for me. Sara
Date: 7/10/2023 3:59:00 AM
This lovely poem comes with a lesson attached to it, Sara...it shows that even in hard times we still serve a purpose in life! ~ Best regards // paul
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Terrell Martin
Date: 7/11/2023 3:09:00 PM
If you don't mind me saying, Sara, everyone's purpose is to love God as he loves us. None of us would be here without him and I believe we should acknowledge that fact every now and again. And writing poetry is act of love which I'm sure he approves of! God bless, Terrell
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/10/2023 5:05:00 AM
Yes, Paul, we all have a purpose even sometimes I wonder what my purpose is. Thank you for your kind review of my work. Sara
Date: 7/10/2023 3:44:00 AM
- Great written Sara ... a perfect place for the vultures :) - hugs
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/10/2023 5:04:00 AM
They seem to be enjoying living there. LOL..There is food around for them to dine when someone kills an animal in the road. Your visits add a new dimension. Sara
Date: 7/9/2023 9:46:00 PM
Great imagery in this haiku. Splendid write, Sara.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/10/2023 5:03:00 AM
Why, thank you, Victor. I appreciate the high regards. Sara
Date: 7/9/2023 7:58:00 PM
Sara, your poem is truly exquisite. The Haiku possesses a remarkable vividness in its imagery.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/10/2023 2:34:00 AM
Why, thank you, Lasaad. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara
Date: 7/9/2023 12:29:00 PM
Oh, great Haiku, the imagery so vivid.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/9/2023 3:16:00 PM
Why, thank you, Eve. Your visit has been uplifting. Sara
Date: 7/9/2023 9:04:00 AM
I can see the scene well in this Haiku, Sara. Nice poetry, my friend. Bill
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/9/2023 9:46:00 AM
Thank you, Bill for your kind review of my work. Sara

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