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“O commercialized corporate franchise” Thou that holds illusions in selling lies Max out your credit cards Lenders be holder’s lords Forfeiting all bank notes as owner cries “O commercialized corporate franchise” My babies wonder about Christmas guys My babies’ futures be scared Must obey corporate lords “O thou commercialized corporate lies” Just commercialized greedy Xmas rush Souls like zombies of the corporate thrust The X of the Christ O Love’s sacrifice “In commercialized corporate we trust” For Commercialized Humor contest Sponsored by: Carolyn Devonshire

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Date: 12/1/2010 12:35:00 AM
Congrats on your win! Very TRUE message!
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Date: 11/29/2010 1:42:00 PM
Many congratulations on your fine 1st place win in Carolyn's contest John >> James
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Date: 11/29/2010 11:54:00 AM
Congratulations on the awesome poem being the Ist Place Winner in Carolyn's contest, John! Best wishes for the week! Love, Audrey
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Date: 11/29/2010 5:20:00 AM
Congratulations John on your 1st Place win in the "Commercialized Holiday Humor" contest sponsored by Carolyn Devonshire. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/28/2010 9:12:00 PM
Great work John, Congratulations on your big win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 11/28/2010 7:43:00 PM
This is an awesome limerick Moses. it does deserve the first position. Many congratulations dear friend.
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Date: 11/28/2010 6:28:00 PM
Funny!! big congrats in the contest, john... you had me in sticthes! warmest, nette
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Date: 11/28/2010 4:10:00 PM
Congratulations, john, on your awesome win. You certainly covered the topic and told it how it is! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 11/28/2010 3:55:00 PM
congratulations on your awesome first place, John!
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Date: 11/28/2010 2:01:00 PM
Congratulations on this win with this great entry in the contest, John
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Date: 11/28/2010 12:30:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Carolyn's fine contest..I especially like the first stanza...Sara
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Date: 11/28/2010 12:19:00 PM
John congratulations on your first place with this awesome write in Carolyn's contest.. Have a blessed Sunday ;-)
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Date: 11/28/2010 10:47:00 AM
Congrats John..what a fine piece..you certainly deserve you first place win.BG
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Date: 11/28/2010 10:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win, dear John. Now you'll have a special stocking for Christmas :) All the best, iolanda
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Date: 11/28/2010 8:44:00 AM
Wonderful write, John. Congrats on your 1st place win! Dan C
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Date: 11/28/2010 8:41:00 AM
A perfect win.....you tell it like it is!!! Enough to say Bah Humbug, except that no one has the right to take the spirit out of Christmas....especially the corporate franchise CEOs! Well done, john!!
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Date: 11/28/2010 7:00:00 AM
Congratulations on taking first place, John. I was impressed with many aspects of this poem. You truly stuck to the topic, showed how greed has taken over the true spirit of Christmas and removed thoughts of Christ with "xmas." Outstanding entry. I'll be working on your stocking. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/19/2010 6:02:00 PM
Christmas guys? lol
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Date: 11/17/2010 8:39:00 AM
Great, great, great write, Moses!!! Too much is commercialized nowadays, here too! They even sell Christmas items here in the supermarkets as early as in September!!! ...All the best, Gert
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Date: 11/16/2010 9:53:00 AM
It is very cold here in Springfield,Ohio today. But I must say your poetry has touched my heart. Thank you for sharing it John. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/15/2010 4:22:00 PM
It's sad but true....This is going to be for sure a winner! Soup Mail...
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Date: 11/15/2010 3:06:00 PM
Yes John sadly people have forgotten the meaning... well written and a winner Im sure...Michael
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Date: 11/15/2010 1:20:00 PM
:) Thanks for supporting the contest, John! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/15/2010 1:07:00 PM
Idols amongst idols, John..and who knows when and ifl Christmas will ever be celebrated the way it was meant to be! Love, Audrey
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