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O Wide-Eyed Baby Browns

O wide-eyed baby browns pink lips curl, produce sucking sound mother loosens her blouse, instinct she rubs his ruddy cheek he drinks deeply as her heart leaps 5/15/2019 Writing Challenge 2, May 2019, Lind68868 Sponsor - Dear Heart Theme Chosen - A Living Scene

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Michelle Faulkner

Date: 5/18/2019 7:21:00 PM

Such a tender, nurturing scene, very heartfelt, Kim-

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/20/2019 12:49:00 PM

Thank you, Michelle! :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/15/2019 10:13:00 PM

This is so precisely penned...I would have added 'daring' 20 years ago...OK, I can see my way to adding it now as well. (Daring, ok; 'shocking,' no). :) gw

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/16/2019 5:42:00 AM

I would say natural. Yet, I love your comment...lol

Panagiota Romios

Date: 5/15/2019 12:11:00 PM

Truly, beautiful, Kim. Loved it. Panagiota

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/15/2019 2:17:00 PM

Thank you, Panagiota!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/15/2019 11:10:00 AM

A gorgeous scene, nothing as wonderful in this world.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/15/2019 11:11:00 AM

Thank you!i loved nursing my kids...so bonding.