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''O, the Echo of Birds Chirping''

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One misty evening my Muse flew away, Soon he was hidden in decay; In the deep forest the wind was moaning, O, the echo of birds chirping. And so, I left my sweet dream to follow, I will search every tomorrow; The branches of trees were softly groaning, O, the echo of birds chirping. But soon the creeping vines had me entwined, Those forest echoes in my mind; A melody went on and on floating, O, the echo of birds chirping. It became quite clear that I was tangled, I tried to scream but was strangled; And in a stream near a frog was croaking, O, the echo of birds chirping. Muse, Muse I cried, don't hide in shadows, My voice mingled with the echoes; On my very soul, whispers were stroking, O, the echo of birds chirping. Then Muse wrapped his arms around me, I am within, my dear, don't you see; Now the echo flowing is my writing, O, the echo of birds chirping. _________________________ December 10, 2012 Kyriele/"'O, the echo of birds chirping"" Copyright Protected, ID 734052 Late June Standard Brian Strand Third Place _______________________ Screwed X Rob Carmack Fourth Place

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Date: 6/21/2017 8:13:00 AM
Congratulations Broken Wings :)
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Date: 6/20/2017 11:11:00 PM
I love the way you repeated the main line and the way you ended it. Very gripping poem. Congratulations!
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Date: 6/20/2017 7:08:00 PM
Congrats!!! Constance...a beautiful 7...god bless my friend...^WW^
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Date: 1/28/2016 9:50:00 PM
broken, Congrats on your Screwed X win. LINDA -
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Constance La France
Date: 1/29/2016 2:26:00 PM
Linda, thanks so much for the congrats !
Date: 1/22/2016 1:50:00 AM
Wonder why it got screwed up earlier.. congrats on big win Broken..
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Constance La France
Date: 1/22/2016 5:21:00 AM
Upma, thanks for the congratulations, appreciate, I have no idea why any judge would not like this but they didn't and it was trashed ~
Date: 1/21/2016 2:45:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Broken Wings. I love the feeling and the flow of your inspiring words. It brings out the sweetness in you. Best Wishes for your continued success. Hugs, Andrew.
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Constance La France
Date: 1/21/2016 5:02:00 PM
Andrew, thanks so much for the congratulations and that lovely comment and the hugs !
Date: 1/20/2016 8:25:00 AM
Broken, Congrats on your win. SKAT **
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Constance La France
Date: 1/20/2016 10:01:00 AM
thanks

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