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''O, the Echo of Birds Chirping''

 
One misty evening my Muse flew away, Soon he was hidden in decay; In the deep forest the wind was moaning, O, the echo of birds chirping. And so, I left my sweet dream to follow, I will search every tomorrow; The branches of trees were softly groaning, O, the echo of birds chirping. But soon the creeping vines had me entwined, Those forest echoes in my mind; A melody went on and on floating, O, the echo of birds chirping. It became quite clear that I was tangled, I tried to scream but was strangled; And in a stream near a frog was croaking, O, the echo of birds chirping. Muse, Muse I cried, don't hide in shadows, My voice mingled with the echoes; On my very soul, whispers were stroking, O, the echo of birds chirping. Then Muse wrapped his arms around me, I am within, my dear, don't you see; Now the echo flowing is my writing, O, the echo of birds chirping. _________________________ December 10, 2012 Kyriele/"'O, the echo of birds chirping"" Copyright Protected, ID 734052 Late June Standard Brian Strand Third Place _______________________ Screwed X Rob Carmack Fourth Place
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Sands Avatar
June 21, 2017 at 8:13 AM
Congratulations Broken Wings :)
Nusker Avatar
June 20, 2017 at 11:11 PM
I love the way you repeated the main line and the way you ended it. Very gripping poem. Congratulations!
Warrior Avatar
June 20, 2017 at 7:08 PM
Congrats!!! Constance...a beautiful 7...god bless my friend...^WW^
A   Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 9:50 PM
broken, Congrats on your Screwed X win. LINDA -
La France Avatar
January 29, 2016 at 2:26 PM
Linda, thanks so much for the congrats !
A. Sharma Avatar
January 22, 2016 at 1:50 AM
Wonder why it got screwed up earlier.. congrats on big win Broken..
La France Avatar
January 22, 2016 at 5:21 AM
Upma, thanks for the congratulations, appreciate, I have no idea why any judge would not like this but they didn't and it was trashed ~
Crisci Avatar
January 21, 2016 at 2:45 PM
Congratulations on your win, Broken Wings. I love the feeling and the flow of your inspiring words. It brings out the sweetness in you. Best Wishes for your continued success. Hugs, Andrew.
La France Avatar
January 21, 2016 at 5:02 PM
Andrew, thanks so much for the congratulations and that lovely comment and the hugs !
A  Avatar
January 20, 2016 at 8:25 AM
Broken, Congrats on your win. SKAT **
La France Avatar
January 20, 2016 at 10:01 AM
thanks
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