Nudity

I want to hide my eyes Lets play peek a boo I want to hide every part of me But am walking like I do, when the kids are not at home In my birthday suit I, the secretive being, cannot hide For my words narrate my life from my history To my current ingredients and spices *Written now* If I dint write, I'd be a like a big ball of explosives ready to explode and burst *Written Dec 2014* Am a very private person but with writing, I feel naked to the world. I feel like am undressing my clothes one by one, leaving nothing for the imagination. Nothing of the imagination of the life I work so hard to hide *Written last year*

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James Fraser

Date: 3/18/2015 5:42:00 PM

Love the message relating to writing through your words Njeri, very nice indeed // James :) :)

Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 3/18/2015 6:40:00 PM

Thank you James for this visit

Suburban Lovechild

Date: 3/15/2015 10:58:00 AM

Nice write. I have a saying that writing (especially poetry and songwriting) is like unzipping your soul in front of everyone, exposed to everyone's thoughts, whims and quips, probably the scariest thing one can do..but so exhilarating at the same time...

Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 3/15/2015 11:54:00 AM

That is exactly true. Its scary but we have to do it. Thank you Suburban Lovechild

Eileen Manassian

Date: 3/14/2015 9:22:00 AM

I feel the same as you, my dear. Poetry is my way to undress. Lovely write. I really enjoyed it. Hugs

Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 3/15/2015 5:50:00 AM

Thank you Aileen, you are a girl with many names. I enjoyed your visit.

Harpreet Kaur

Date: 3/14/2015 8:52:00 AM

Well, this nudity is required for sanity of an overwhelmed mind

Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 3/15/2015 5:48:00 AM

That's true. Thank you Harpreet

Arthur Vaso

Date: 3/13/2015 9:28:00 PM

We all feel this, in fact I may just post a poetic reply!

Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 3/15/2015 5:47:00 AM

I saw your nudity, it was awesome. Thank you Arthur

Jaycee Cervenka

Date: 3/13/2015 7:57:00 PM

To write in public is to be very brave. it's to put it all out there for everyone to see and judge. There are days I'd rather walk around a house of mirrors naked. LOL Hugs ~jan

Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 3/13/2015 9:07:00 PM

It's like I have to write coz that's how I deal with issues but its hard to know that everyone is looking at you in your nakedness; your highest and your lowest. Thank you so much Janet. I appreciate your visit a lot.