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Nude Musings

Like the full moon I sleep nude Feeling less than new Yet quite comfortable in my skin Despite fuchsia flaw My inner child claws At any chance to be lost Like lavender flowers of the wall Blending in the lesser of sins For one to lose oneself amoungst the in Crowd and not feel left out yet how Do dandelions withstand the windy Shouts of the other boisterous bulbs By riding on blue breeze And kissing the tree leaves Landing in foreign garden grasses And melting like molasses Into a new world garden With a hopeful heart sharpened To the singing melody of destiny.

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Date: 6/14/2024 1:10:00 AM
We need more of these types of poem. Human skin is such a wonderful thing that has the power to heal itself. Most yearn to cuddle up to the skin of another on a cold winter night and maybe a bonus perhaps if one does not fall asleep first as warm and cozy has that effect. Research with few clothes or none at all gets better sleep. Liked the way you melded seemingly random thoughts into a poem that flowed beautifully. Regards David in NZ. You might like my poem When the Rain Comes in the Night
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Karen Jones
Date: 6/14/2024 4:18:00 AM
David thanks and I can’t wait to read it!
Date: 6/12/2024 7:02:00 PM
This a deep and beaytiful write and gives rise to deep conteplation. Very umique pen, Karen Pangie xx
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Karen Jones
Date: 6/12/2024 8:50:00 PM
Thanks for your kind words Pangie!
Date: 6/11/2024 3:23:00 PM
Hello Karen, it is such a beajutiful poem. i do like it. i am making it my fav. Hugs. Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/12/2024 9:50:00 AM
Hello Karen, you are very welcome. Hugs. /Darlene/
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Karen Jones
Date: 6/11/2024 4:43:00 PM
I’m honored you fav it Darlene! Thank for your kind words as well!
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