Now Gone, I So Wish I Could Sing a Song

Now Gone, I So Wish I Could Sing A Song

Why did he smile only by few inches
His face contorted and it was askew
By the garden was a flock of finches
Old age, do we forget what we once knew
His arms were skinny, not near as mighty
His head kinda bald and his beard bright white
He said his first wife was mad, too flighty
When loving her body was quite a sight
But he was my beloved dad and proud
Often complained of failing eyesight
And when he did that it was very loud
Told me when you do something do it right.

My dad, so tough, honest as day is long.
Now gone, I so wish I could sing a song!

Robert J. Lindley, 6-23-2023
Sonnet, 

My father was the most honest man I've ever known.
And tough as nails too.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Messina Avatar
July 13, 2023 at 2:53 AM
A fine tribute to your loving dad, Robert. Belated congrats on POTD! Hope all is well ,my friend. Best wishes...Charlie
Lindley Avatar
July 13, 2023 at 5:12 AM
Thank you, my friend. God bless you for commenting .
Tor Avatar
June 26, 2023 at 1:27 PM
Robert your father was a great dad. Love your words of him in this wonderful Poetry of yours. Just noticed you won POTD Congratulations my friend. Well deserved...
Lindley Avatar
June 27, 2023 at 3:41 PM
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Rodrigues Avatar
June 26, 2023 at 5:06 AM
Congratulations, Robert, on POTD! Something about every nuance of a beloved parent, even if it was annoying at the time, it could be the most endearing. I love my dad’s smile, so elusive for neatly a year after Mom died. I remember the the thing that gave me, my sis and dad a good laugh. Oh how sweet that was. I know you miss him. Hugs, Robert ~ your friend, Kim
Lindley Avatar
June 27, 2023 at 3:41 PM
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Roper Avatar
June 25, 2023 at 7:08 PM
Lovely write a wonderful tribute to your dad. Congratulations on POTD.
Lindley Avatar
June 27, 2023 at 3:47 PM
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Nicole Avatar
June 25, 2023 at 5:50 PM
Dear Robert, it sounds like your father was an amazing man. As health declines, it will cause many issues physically and mentally. Unconditional love is tough, yet tender and delicate, all at the same time. This is such a beautiful tribute to your father. Congratulations my dear friend, on Poem of the Day. Many wonderful blessings to you and yours. Hugs, Brandy
Lindley Avatar
June 27, 2023 at 3:47 PM
Thank you for commenting. God bless you.
Andresen Avatar
June 25, 2023 at 12:36 PM
- Lovely written for your beloved dad, Robert :) - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. :) - hugs
Lindley Avatar
June 27, 2023 at 3:47 PM
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Lawrence Avatar
June 25, 2023 at 11:43 AM
Loving tribute . I love the details that brought your father and his changes and behaviors to life for the reader ! Congratulations dear Robert on POTD. Hugs , Susan :)
Lindley Avatar
June 27, 2023 at 3:46 PM
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Goldsmith Avatar
June 25, 2023 at 8:34 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. A lovely write/tribute. Have a blessed day/week.................
Lindley Avatar
June 27, 2023 at 3:46 PM
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May Avatar
June 25, 2023 at 8:29 AM
Great tribute to your father, Congrats on POTD
Lindley Avatar
June 27, 2023 at 3:46 PM
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Wolf Avatar
June 25, 2023 at 6:42 AM
May you father's memory be for a blessing, Robert. And may you know no more sorrow. ~ Gershon
Lindley Avatar
June 27, 2023 at 3:46 PM
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Buhagiar Avatar
June 25, 2023 at 6:27 AM
Congratulations on your POTD. I am ashamed I stopped following you but I always found your poems difficult for me to to understand. I am getting too old and senile. Yours is a fine tribute to a great man. Well done Robert with apologies.
Lindley Avatar
June 27, 2023 at 3:45 PM
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Fowler Avatar
June 25, 2023 at 6:07 AM
Lovely tribute to your father Robert. Congrats on POTD! :)
Lindley Avatar
June 27, 2023 at 3:45 PM
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Kitchin Avatar
June 25, 2023 at 5:59 AM
Robert, congratulations on POTD, a nice tribute to your Dad.
Lindley Avatar
June 27, 2023 at 3:45 PM
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Baker Avatar
June 25, 2023 at 5:59 AM
Congratulations on your tribute poem of your father being chosen as the POTD, Robert. The image you painted was well done. Another of the sonnets I amire. As to singing a song, I sang "The Lord's Prayer to my mother on the last day of her life. At the end she joined in, 'thine is the kingdom, the power and the glory forever' and passed on to be with Him. Thanks for bringing that memory back to me again my dear friend. Enjoy this blessed day that we've been given. Bill
Lindley Avatar
June 27, 2023 at 3:45 PM
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Lane Avatar
June 25, 2023 at 5:46 AM
Congratulations, Robert, for such melancholy lines of your Sonnet being chosen as today's POTD.
Lindley Avatar
June 27, 2023 at 3:44 PM
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Bell Avatar
June 25, 2023 at 5:40 AM
Great tribute, not enough tough fathers out there.
Lindley Avatar
June 27, 2023 at 3:44 PM
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Ray Choudhury Avatar
June 25, 2023 at 5:36 AM
Dear Robert, a great tribute to your father - brought memories of my father - tough and kind! Congratulations on POTD.
Lindley Avatar
June 27, 2023 at 3:44 PM
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Doll Avatar
June 25, 2023 at 5:31 AM
Robert, great memories of your Father. I can tell that you were loved by him very much. Keep it close to you and eventually you will be able to sing his song. Wishing you comfort~ Warren
Lindley Avatar
June 27, 2023 at 3:44 PM
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Read Avatar
June 25, 2023 at 5:16 AM
Hi Robert, Lovely tribute to your father I'm sure he's looking down with a smile.
Lindley Avatar
June 27, 2023 at 3:43 PM
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Pandit Avatar
June 25, 2023 at 5:07 AM
BIG congrats on POTD, Robert. Awesome tribute you wrote to honor your father's memories. Enjoy your special day today.
Lindley Avatar
June 27, 2023 at 3:43 PM
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Gentile Avatar
June 25, 2023 at 4:51 AM
Robert, congratulations on your POTD honors!!
Lindley Avatar
June 27, 2023 at 3:43 PM
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George Avatar
June 25, 2023 at 4:40 AM
Some have a loving heart bneath their rough exterior ! Your Dad must have been one such person. You can be proud that you had such a dad. A beautiful remembrance of your father. Congratulatons on your POTD
Lindley Avatar
June 27, 2023 at 3:43 PM
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Kavanagh  Avatar
June 25, 2023 at 3:42 AM
The qualities of a good man Robert, honest and tough, I too was lucky to have a Father with such traits, A wonderful tribute beautifully written, I’m sure Pop’s would be proud, congratulations on POTD, cheers David
Lindley Avatar
June 27, 2023 at 3:42 PM
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Cunningham Avatar
June 25, 2023 at 2:41 AM
What a beautiful tribute to your father Robert, congratulations on a well deserved honour of POTD. Tom
Lindley Avatar
June 27, 2023 at 3:42 PM
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Seeker Avatar
June 25, 2023 at 1:56 AM
A beautiful, heartfelt tribute to your Dad, Robert ~ may his soul rest in peace, in God’s domain of boundless love and light. Warmest congratulations on POTD
Lindley Avatar
June 27, 2023 at 3:42 PM
Thank you for commenting. God bless you.
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