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Luck vs. Blessing Prayer vs. Wish Earth vs Heaven Beauty vs. Ram in the bush Seeing earthly desires Vs. Being mad at God Understanding vs. Doubts Realization vs. Dreams Today vs. Tommarow Where I am vs. Where I want to be For Heather Who I wished Loved me.

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I Am Anaya

Date: 2/1/2025 2:20:00 PM

John, I enjoy your poetry now, since we are new poet friends, well your a real poet, so clever and inspiring! Hear that, sweet Heather.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/31/2025 12:37:00 PM

Sorry, that Heather doesn't love you but who knows time could change that. Thanks for sharing. Sara K

John Loving Iii
Date: 2/13/2025 9:06:00 AM

Only realizing form deep thought she might have. I dompt her for my doubts and fear of hurt.