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November's Wind

perhaps it was the cold november wind that reminded me of the bitter bite the cold touch of death's hands or the lips of someone gone perhaps it was the leaves being tossed about, like a mind unable to grasp the reality of another life, gone so young perhaps it was the trees now colorless, half dressed that reminded me, everything must die perhaps it was the sunset thick black clouds, surrounded by red that reminded me my heart bleeds the same... another life is gone another season's changed another day is gone another scar is born etched forever in my mind my heart bled the same....

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Date: 8/19/2013 11:13:00 AM
awesome write Sandra...
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Sandra Adams
Date: 8/19/2013 12:16:00 PM
thank you Joseph...this time of year always brings out the death poems...so many have left between august and December....
Date: 8/16/2013 8:21:00 AM
This is so sad. Eloquently expressed emotions. You are an amazing poetess.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 8/16/2013 10:49:00 AM
thank you...the fall brings forth many memories of death for me...the season inspires me...
Date: 8/14/2013 8:09:00 PM
I see death as going through a cold chill...maybe momentarily. I really like your expression of the elements of death. Very well written :)
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Date: 8/16/2013 10:51:00 AM
Thank you Karen...the fall inspires me often!
Date: 8/14/2013 10:02:00 AM
Besides November being my birthday month, I have a HUGE affinity towards the month in general, especially its mood changes, etc. Your words in this writing have hit me pretty hard. Excellent job!
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Date: 8/16/2013 10:52:00 AM
Thank you Drake...my birthday month is October...the season seems to often inspire me in many different ways!

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