November's Saint

November’s Saint

I watch Truman’s Capote's tale
in November
the south, trapped in frost
bare, naked to the eye

a penury of snow
like poor folk clothes
hardly enough to cover
the jagged edges of bones.

a boy eking out love
as a winter bird
searches for warmth
huddled against the wind.

days sad and drab
the only colour in paper kites
and dime movies
shared with a friend.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Fleming Avatar
September 28, 2017 at 8:22 PM
I think this has great atmosphere...and the last verse -- what a bowser!! You really nailed it with this one, Patricia...nicely done. :) john
Cresswell Avatar
September 28, 2017 at 9:08 PM
Oh John come Christmas look for the film. If anything has ever taken my heart the film did. Thank you for reading.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
September 28, 2017 at 9:06 AM
...somebody please get this lady a publisher ;p
Cresswell Avatar
September 28, 2017 at 2:32 PM
Thank you Maureen but I don't have the foggiest notion of how to go about it and I can't afford to self publish. So I guess you are stuck reading my stuff forever(wicked cackle).
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