November Swapping

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the eye-catching leaves strutting in the gentle breeze~ November spotlights leaves spin to silence as they sway among the trees~ bright thirsty blossoms floral leaf coated make a motion to the stream~ golden craving blooms cold first migration a white feather falls gently~ as opposed to drift Written: November 12, 2022 A Brian Strand Premiere Choice Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Valsa George

Date: 11/3/2022 6:43:00 PM

Love all the haikus especially the last one about the first migration. All the best, dear friend !

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/3/2022 10:22:00 AM

- Beautiful images in these haiku poems, Las :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/3/2022 5:19:00 AM

Lovely images you convey my friend in these haiku poems. Well crafted November scenes.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/3/2022 2:06:00 AM

Loved your haikus, especially the last one.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 11/2/2022 5:05:00 PM

An endless melody of Haiku, my dearest friend, Lasaad! Bravo! God bless you!

Ann Peck

Date: 11/2/2022 3:42:00 PM

Lovely, gentle haikus, Lasaad. I especially love "eye-catching leaves strutting in gentle breeze."