Nothing's Known

Watching the ocean breathing in and out, Nature's truths lap at the shores of my doubt. And I search the sky for traces of God, amongst trillions of stars scattered about. Walking upon the same roads, preachers trod; I find their fire-and-brimstone sermons odd. For I do not believe in damnation, or else unconditional love's a fraud. Free will designs our moral foundation, what is sin but yielding to temptation? And these thoughts cascade like unceasing waves; as I contemplate hell and salvation. Obsessed by what may lie beyond our graves, we find ourselves led, like religious slaves. And want guarantees against the unknown, assured by the belief that prayer saves. I don't accept that God sits on a throne, nor that we're born sinners who must atone. For I believe God's love is eternal, and unconditional; I'm not alone.
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Gauthier Avatar
March 18, 2018 at 9:56 PM
I love these lines "And I search the sky for traces of God amongst trillions of stars scattered about" as well as your closing stanza. Awesome form - I need to try it!
Pinet Avatar
March 19, 2018 at 9:09 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Kamoonpuri Avatar
August 6, 2017 at 3:58 AM
Yes I believe that's Gods love is unconditional too. This poem is marvellous, esp admire the first stanza. Yet each stanza is great in muse and rhyming. Kudos. Pls do write your thoughts under my latest poem too.
Pinet Avatar
August 6, 2017 at 9:20 AM
Thanks S.zaynab, your comments and support are most welcome my friend, Emile.
Kiser Avatar
August 6, 2017 at 1:27 AM
I must agree; beautifully penned.
Pinet Avatar
August 6, 2017 at 9:19 AM
Thanks M.L., your comments and support are most welcome my friend, Emile.
Pandit Avatar
August 5, 2017 at 10:09 PM
Wonderful! Love the ending.
Pinet Avatar
August 6, 2017 at 9:18 AM
Thanks Vijay, your comments and support are most welcome my friend, Emile.
Manassian Avatar
August 5, 2017 at 12:23 PM
My dear....your writing is always of such a high caliber. I'm awed. This is no exception. You bring important questions for one to ponder. God's love is eternal...that is foundational to my belief system, yet...I do believe in a life to come and in a day of judgement. Surely God's justice and fairness is as absolutely as His love. How can we content ourselves with knowing that those who perpetrate heinous crimes will be unpunished...Deep questions.
Pinet Avatar
August 6, 2017 at 9:17 AM
Thanks Eileen... justice, fairness and punishment are human concepts and only apply to this plane of existence, I believe they have no meaning in God's spiritual realm, I appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.
Nyaga Avatar
August 5, 2017 at 10:20 AM
A thought provoking piece, broaching on all the right questions.. Excellent delivery..//Almighty Bless
Pinet Avatar
August 5, 2017 at 11:48 AM
Thanks Lewis, your comments and support are most welcome my friend, Emile.
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