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Nothingness

deepened cloud rises like yeast glazing my hair pliant with soft tempo of night's hum-- arched eyelids narrow that through dusk's exit, hidden stars pulse a w a ke wide a w a k e inside breath's stillness and fire, as my hunger for nothingness lingers Brian Strand's End 2018 Contest

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Caycay Jennings

Date: 12/20/2018 8:13:00 PM

Oh, exquisite imagery - read twice to inhale it thoroughly. Your pen can do that to people, Nette. Think of you often, always picturing you kicking cobblestones thru life. Have a joy-filled Holiday, Merry Christmas to you, an individuated individual. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

James Peranteau

Date: 12/19/2018 10:18:00 PM

I am certain, yep, certain that nothingness is inherent with writers dear poet.... especially; with poets! *smiles....miss ya nette! Have a great Holiday and up coming very soon....'New Year' ! Much love, james

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/19/2018 4:23:00 PM

Well written Nette, and once that's all there was,but here we are. Good luck. Tom.

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/19/2018 3:42:00 PM

Out of Nothingness, a wonderful poem..a joy to read, nette...

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 12/19/2018 3:28:00 PM

"Nothingness" is but a serene enchantment.. a unique wonder your reader tastes and revels in.. Only in the realm of poetry can we attain this dimension of beauty! I can feel the magic of your words, nette! A great pleasure to read and reread.. my warmest regards.. nice to meet you dear nette.. Be blessed always.