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Nothing Special I Suppose

It goes against my grain to fight Men will be men you know Yet,shattered is my special night I need to tell him so! I keep expecting something grand As I watch the time pass So slowly as the specks of sand Drift down the hourglass I'm losing hope,my ire is up The broken heart I'm bearing Is showing half-empty,the cup As at his face I'm staring "Is something wrong,babe?"he wonders So innocently blameless I feel his weakness and blunders Why,that man must be shameless! I worked so hard on his birthday So it would be the best A special time in every way Now he's put to the test He's drawing a blank,it's plain to see I'm mad as an old,wet hen! To him it's some big mystery He'd better think again! I must admit,he's awfully cute And in for a surprize When he's there in his birthday suit He might then realize When I turn him down later tonight And give him the cold shoulder His hurting my heart just isn't right I'm wiser now that I'm older! **for contest"Emotional Response" **sponsored by Joyce Johnson

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/25/2011 10:20:00 AM
Congratulations Deb,on your win in Joyce Johnson's contest "Emotional Response". Love, Carol
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Date: 2/23/2011 4:29:00 AM
Congrats Deb on your wonderful win in Joyce's contest with this dynamic entry luv.. enjoy another top ten sweet victory with luv..
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Date: 2/22/2011 8:49:00 PM
Congrats on a well deserved win, Deb. Nice going. xxxRalph
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Date: 2/22/2011 8:28:00 PM
Joyce did like this one, Deb. Congratulations on winning with this entry.
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Date: 2/22/2011 8:23:00 PM
Stunning write deb. Loved the end.Many warm congrats for this win.
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Date: 2/22/2011 7:54:00 PM
wishing you great CONGRATS for this fascinating win, deb..:) huggs, nette
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Date: 2/22/2011 7:31:00 PM
Great job Deb..Congratulations. Joyce
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Date: 2/15/2011 4:55:00 PM
Joyce should like this one because I like it. Deb, you have your usual great descriptiveness and rhyming in each verse of this offering.
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Book: Shattered Sighs