Nothing Special I Suppose

It goes against my grain to fight
Men will be men you know
Yet,shattered is my special night
I need to tell him so!

I keep expecting something grand
As I watch the time pass
So slowly as the specks of sand
Drift down the hourglass

I'm losing hope,my ire is up
The broken heart I'm bearing
Is showing half-empty,the cup
As at his face I'm staring

"Is something wrong,babe?"he wonders
So innocently blameless
I feel his weakness and blunders
Why,that man must be shameless!

I worked so hard on his birthday
So it would be the best
A special time in every way
Now he's put to the test

He's drawing a blank,it's plain to see
I'm mad as an old,wet hen!
To him it's some big mystery
He'd better think again!

I must admit,he's awfully cute
And in for a surprize
When he's there in his birthday suit
He might then realize

When I turn him down later tonight
And give him the cold shoulder
His hurting my heart just isn't right
I'm wiser now that I'm older!




**for contest"Emotional Response"
**sponsored by Joyce Johnson
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
February 25, 2011 at 10:20 AM
Congratulations Deb,on your win in Joyce Johnson's contest "Emotional Response". Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
February 23, 2011 at 4:29 AM
Congrats Deb on your wonderful win in Joyce's contest with this dynamic entry luv.. enjoy another top ten sweet victory with luv..
Taylor Avatar
February 22, 2011 at 8:49 PM
Congrats on a well deserved win, Deb. Nice going. xxxRalph
Pettit Avatar
February 22, 2011 at 8:28 PM
Joyce did like this one, Deb. Congratulations on winning with this entry.
Mannan Avatar
February 22, 2011 at 8:23 PM
Stunning write deb. Loved the end.Many warm congrats for this win.
Onclaud Avatar
February 22, 2011 at 7:54 PM
wishing you great CONGRATS for this fascinating win, deb..:) huggs, nette
Johnson Avatar
February 22, 2011 at 7:31 PM
Great job Deb..Congratulations. Joyce
Pettit Avatar
February 15, 2011 at 4:55 PM
Joyce should like this one because I like it. Deb, you have your usual great descriptiveness and rhyming in each verse of this offering.
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