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Nothing More To Lose

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As shadows set and day departs, dusk bruises the sky black and blue. And like a billion bleeding hearts, the sun adopts a crimson hue. Infidelity's surreal, severing my heart in mid-beat. And although your love wasn't real, leaving; is a difficult feat. Wounded feelings fester within as the sun abandons the sky. And tomorrow cannot begin with the words of a whispered lie. Filling my heart with fear and dread, depression and anger compete. And when I think of what was said, I'm blown away by your deceit. I feel robbed that love didn't last, and I question my heart for clues. My trust lies betrayed in the past, and now, I've nothing more to lose. (Quatrain) 1/27/2016

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Line Gauthier

Date: 5/15/2018 7:34:00 PM

Love these lines "Yet tomorrow cannot begin with the words of a whispered lie". Well done, Emile.

Emile Pinet
Date: 5/16/2018 8:49:00 AM

Thank you so much Line, your comments are most appreciated my friend, Emile.

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 1/28/2016 12:40:00 AM

G'day Emile ... the rhythm and rhyme is very good Emile. Lost love is dramatic but time often heals - Lindsay

Emile Pinet
Date: 1/28/2016 8:34:00 AM

G'day Lindsay, your visits are most welcome, thank you. Emile.

White Sage

Date: 1/27/2016 5:12:00 PM

well written Emile...well said...this is...great!

Emile Pinet
Date: 1/27/2016 5:23:00 PM

Thanks White Sage, I appreciate your time and comments. Emile.

Daniel Turner

Date: 1/27/2016 1:02:00 PM

'It's over and done, but the heartache lives on inside," Barry Gibb. Very honest write, Emile. Your emotion pours out onto the page.

Emile Pinet
Date: 1/27/2016 5:10:00 PM

Thank so much Daniel, I appreciate your comments. Emile.

Matthew Anish

Date: 1/27/2016 10:54:00 AM

You tell a sad tale in this work. An all too common occurrence. Nice photo, too. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Emile Pinet
Date: 1/27/2016 5:10:00 PM

Thank you Matthew, I appreciate your comments. Emile.

Brian Davey

Date: 1/27/2016 10:54:00 AM

Very real life event and I like that you chose to take care of yourself in he end, nothing is worth the killing of your Soul which so many people do staying in relationships where this happens. Thank you for sharing

Emile Pinet
Date: 1/27/2016 5:09:00 PM

Thanks so much Brian, I appreciate your comments. Emile.