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Nothing Left Inside My Chest

Once a heart used to beat to the rhythm of love behind my ribs, you walked into my life and I poured all my heart to you. for a while it felt like there were only two people in the world you and I. I thought ruled the world and that our hearts beat frantically. I thought we were in love but I guess I was wrong. I loved you, you took it and kept it we were suppose to share love but you were selfish with it. My heart you had but you tore it apart You left it bleeding, as blood oozed out so did love and every bit of life it had. It withered and died and you smiled and lied that you loved me. what a fool I was to have listened to yo lies but who would blame me when words sipped out of your mouth with the sweetness of honey not knowing it will sting like a bee. the touch of your lips deceived me and the look in your eyes blinded me. oh now i have learnt from this that loving someone is so intense it feels like it will last forever. I can't believe that you never feel the same way. I can't believe that this sacred relationship has been betrayed. I was sure that we were in the same wavelength and that we understood each other. Meanwhile, we walked on parallel and eventually divergent tracks the entire time. The feelings of betrayal and hurt may take many years to heal. because my chest is empty only pain remains

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 1/23/2016 5:07:00 PM
albert, I'm just stopping by to enjoy your poem. Have a wonderful day. ** LINDA**
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Date: 11/17/2015 10:57:00 PM
Albert, I really enjoyed this poem thanks for sharing **SKAT**"
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Date: 4/2/2014 2:38:00 AM
Matters of the heart
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Date: 4/1/2014 4:23:00 PM
oh what an emotional write - I do hope you find someone special to get over this betrayal. hugs Jan xxx
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Jan Allison
Date: 4/2/2014 2:42:00 AM
Oh Albert I joined in Feb this year BESTTTT thing I ever did am learning so much and made some awesome soup friends who encourage and inspire you. Mian thing is just have fun, Jan xx
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Albert Bulaka
Date: 4/2/2014 2:35:00 AM
hey Jan thanx for the comments hope to learn from you guys.
Date: 3/29/2014 4:20:00 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Albert :) - I choose your first very well written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Albert Bulaka
Date: 3/29/2014 4:28:00 PM
thnx Anne and I hope to learn alot from hear
Date: 3/29/2014 11:49:00 AM
Hi, Albert, you express the hurt feelings well. I can feel the betrayal. , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will find much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your poetry. At this very moment, I will greet you with the same smile, other poets passed when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your writings. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Albert Bulaka
Date: 3/29/2014 4:09:00 PM
hey Skat A thnx 4 d comment n warm welcome, please feel free to ask what you want to know about me or add me on facebook Al Bulaka
Date: 3/29/2014 10:19:00 AM
Thanx Poet Destroyer A
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Date: 3/29/2014 8:36:00 AM
Albert, this is deep, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and offer positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to my contest and poetry page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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