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Nothing For the Pain

Your words hurt like the kiss of a bee sting, covering my face with a blanket of tears Said I wasn’t man enough to be your king, that I didn’t know how to shift your gears You told me that your river moves real fast, and you don’t have the patience to wait for me Said your love was like riding a rocket blast, and for amusement you let me hop on free Never was told, after the rush came the drain When your motor went cold, our love took a tailspin Hard was the crash, fell into a forest of rain Didn’t eject quick enough, pain started kicking in I pleaded in vain for you not to leave this way, you laughed at me with pure utter disdain Reminding me what you said on our first day: Pleasure you give, got nothing for the pain

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 9/22/2017 8:55:00 PM
Life is life...A little bit of love is better than no love" She sounds like a really smart girl...Enjoyed your poem Freddie...Have a good night
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Date: 9/22/2017 5:55:00 PM
Very excellent write. There is great passion and feeling in it. The pain is real.
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Date: 9/22/2017 2:53:00 PM
A well written very sad poem Freddie. The reader can feel it. Harsh, cold and hurtful.
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