Notes On a Wrist


"Notes on a Wrist" 

the pulse felt
under nibs
of fingertips
translates a life

the semicolan
stretches like 
the devil
hungers 

it can 
wait a long time
eternally feeding you
drip by drip

ever present
the missing 
hovers, like a  
hummingbird

never sits

beak and feet 
wet in the detail
tasting the temptation 
to cut strings

fleeting
and fickle
like a child 
switches graces

the keys 
black and white
the forest contains
all your precious things

hard to leave 
leaves, all their 
autumn winter stories 
sentences written 

and spent 

like veins
singing stinging 
the body of work 
temporary rent

(LadyLabyrinth / 2023)





"There is a fable in the forest
whispered by branches as they blow,
a tale about the truth of leaving
things that no longer help you grow.
For on the surface it looks simple;
like you need only lace your boots,
but there is nothing quite as painful
as untangling your roots.
And proof is found in tree stumps
of the price some pay to flee,
that they would cut 
their lives in half, 
to cut the time before they're free.
Yet from the little left behind
Life has been known to grow again,
for unless you take your roots, 
a part of you will still remain."
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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B. Avatar
April 27, 2023 at 5:18 AM
A very belated POTD, Lady.. Really enjoyed your Masterpiece!! Exquisite write, my friend.. As always your talent shines! Many blessings to you..
Labyrinth Avatar
April 27, 2023 at 7:10 AM
I don't know about masterpiece Robertina. But thank you. xx
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March 28, 2023 at 9:34 PM
wow just superb poetic writings; great to read; congrats for being selected the poem as POTD
Labyrinth Avatar
March 29, 2023 at 12:49 AM
Thank you.
Anaya Avatar
March 18, 2023 at 6:38 PM
Mon cheri, once again we meet on POTD. Alas, a universal sentiment—a rude awakening f0r the young and callow. You always hurt the one you love—Mills Bro's Ettu Brute?—Julius Caesar, Shakespeare. You'll sing the blues in the night—Johnny Mercer. To hell with everyone--keep writing—Me!
Labyrinth Avatar
March 19, 2023 at 12:02 AM
hmmm, yes I would say I fear, but I don't, "hell is empty and all the devils are here". Yes thy quill quivereth over the next delight. Danke schoen mein gut frau. Warm regards, Albertina Faust.
Labyrinth Avatar
March 19, 2023 at 12:00 AM
"The Seven Strings of the Lyre"/George Sands. A Woman's Version of the Faust Legend
Labyrinth Avatar
March 18, 2023 at 11:57 PM
https://uncpress.org/book/9780807857397/a-womans-version-of-the-faust-legend/#:~:text=George%20Sand's%20The%20Seven%20Strings,Faust%20legend%20by%20a%20woman.
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March 18, 2023 at 4:09 PM
Lady, congratulations on you POTD. Nicely done. :)
Labyrinth Avatar
March 18, 2023 at 5:26 PM
Thank you.
Labyrinth Avatar
March 18, 2023 at 3:02 PM
"The Wolf's Pockets".
Labyrinth Avatar
March 18, 2023 at 3:02 PM
https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/the_wolfs_pockets_1158749
Goldsmith Avatar
March 18, 2023 at 9:07 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. An amazing write. Thanks for the added note at the bottom. Sometimes cut/run is the best thing to do. People can be very hurtful. Have a very blessed day/weekend....................
Goldsmith Avatar
March 18, 2023 at 3:36 PM
You and Shakespeare have it right. The ones you love can hurt you the most. I have never understood this and guess I never will..............  A writer is born to write and must never stop. Yes, take a break to get rejuvenated and find more creativity. Write On............. Enjoy your weekend writing away...........................
Labyrinth Avatar
March 18, 2023 at 2:44 PM
Thank you Paula. My take on it. It’s ironic that sometimes the people you’d take a bullet for are the ones who pull the trigger. Shakespeare had it down pat, “though those that are betray’d do feel the treason sharply, yet the traitor stands in worse case of woe”.
Labyrinth Avatar
March 18, 2023 at 2:44 PM
A comrad of mine used the word Machevallian, quite possibly this suits the flavour of survival. I’ve observed that betrayal sometimes is necessary to unite us. Some write because they want to. Some write because they have to. When the writing ceases, you may as well have weighted your pockets with stones and walked into a river, or left the gas stove on with the doors and windows closed, or sat in a bathtub and let the life run out of you, swallowed a bullet, or used that last piece of skipping rope. So you continue to write and from that perhaps is birthed the best from the worst of you. My opinion on the subject. Of course, to follow the course of action confronting you before the writing, and seeing it through, would leave you lost in the Bardo forever, which in itself can be a form of hell.
Fowler Avatar
March 18, 2023 at 6:58 AM
Oh, this is fabulous! Congratulations on POTD! :)
Labyrinth Avatar
March 18, 2023 at 2:39 PM
It has its merits. Thank you.
Seeker Avatar
March 18, 2023 at 6:47 AM
Back with warmest congratulations on POTD, LL
Labyrinth Avatar
March 18, 2023 at 2:42 PM
Merci. "Without an opportunity, their abilities would have been wasted, and without their abilities, the opportunity would have arisen in vain." I've been reading up on Machiavelli.
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March 18, 2023 at 6:21 AM
Congrats on doing this POTD. You present such a variegated perspective. Thank you for this.
Labyrinth Avatar
March 18, 2023 at 2:42 PM
Some might say warped. Thank you Ms. Feeley.
Seeker Avatar
March 16, 2023 at 9:37 PM
Shhh ~ silence please, as I mark this as a fav
Labyrinth Avatar
March 16, 2023 at 9:47 PM
https://youtu.be/4KzFe50RQkQ
Labyrinth Avatar
March 16, 2023 at 9:46 PM
merci bar coop
Labyrinth Avatar
March 16, 2023 at 2:57 PM
"I put this moment here..."
Labyrinth Avatar
March 16, 2023 at 2:57 PM
https://youtu.be/Mgwz1JBon2E
Mccann Avatar
March 16, 2023 at 1:08 PM
Oh, Lady, this will have to be a keeper. Every line a forever moment. I can't work out how to answer your comment on my short stories. So grateful for your interest! They have been taken from a book by the same name- on kindle/au as Marguerite: a Letter, I think. There are lots more in it but my energy is too low to do more. You walk a fine line; take care! Elizabeth
Labyrinth Avatar
March 16, 2023 at 2:49 PM
Thank you Elizabeth. Many walk a fine line in this life...the important act, is to walk your own line. Some lines are straight and true, others not so. We all meet up at the same place eventually, for good review and not so good.
Labyrinth Avatar
March 16, 2023 at 2:48 PM
I especially liked your poem Delmore. It transported me to another's world, both yours and his. I wonder what drew you to Delmore. Your energy pulses through your poems, especially your short stories. This writer has great respect for your life and work. The Marguerite stories most beautiful and enriching.
Labyrinth Avatar
March 16, 2023 at 7:13 AM
Ludovico Einaudi - 85mm (Visualizer)
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March 16, 2023 at 7:14 AM
https://youtu.be/_94Tegz87EQ
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