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Notes On a Wrist

"Notes on a Wrist" the pulse felt under nibs of fingertips translates a life the semicolan stretches like the devil hungers it can wait a long time eternally feeding you drip by drip ever present the missing hovers, like a hummingbird never sits beak and feet wet in the detail tasting the temptation to cut strings fleeting and fickle like a child switches graces the keys black and white the forest contains all your precious things hard to leave leaves, all their autumn winter stories sentences written and spent like veins singing stinging the body of work temporary rent (LadyLabyrinth / 2023) "There is a fable in the forest whispered by branches as they blow, a tale about the truth of leaving things that no longer help you grow. For on the surface it looks simple; like you need only lace your boots, but there is nothing quite as painful as untangling your roots. And proof is found in tree stumps of the price some pay to flee, that they would cut their lives in half, to cut the time before they're free. Yet from the little left behind Life has been known to grow again, for unless you take your roots, a part of you will still remain."

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Date: 4/27/2023 5:18:00 AM
A very belated POTD, Lady.. Really enjoyed your Masterpiece!! Exquisite write, my friend.. As always your talent shines! Many blessings to you..
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 4/27/2023 7:10:00 AM
I don't know about masterpiece Robertina. But thank you. xx
Date: 3/28/2023 9:34:00 PM
wow just superb poetic writings; great to read; congrats for being selected the poem as POTD
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 3/29/2023 12:49:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 3/18/2023 6:38:00 PM
Mon cheri, once again we meet on POTD. Alas, a universal sentiment—a rude awakening f0r the young and callow. You always hurt the one you love—Mills Bro's Ettu Brute?—Julius Caesar, Shakespeare. You'll sing the blues in the night—Johnny Mercer. To hell with everyone--keep writing—Me!
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 3/19/2023 12:02:00 AM
hmmm, yes I would say I fear, but I don't, "hell is empty and all the devils are here". Yes thy quill quivereth over the next delight. Danke schoen mein gut frau. Warm regards, Albertina Faust.
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 3/19/2023 12:00:00 AM
"The Seven Strings of the Lyre"/George Sands. A Woman's Version of the Faust Legend
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 3/18/2023 11:57:00 PM
https://uncpress.org/book/9780807857397/a-womans-version-of-the-faust-legend/#:~:text=George%20Sand's%20The%20Seven%20Strings,Faust%20legend%20by%20a%20woman.
Date: 3/18/2023 4:09:00 PM
Lady, congratulations on you POTD. Nicely done. :)
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 3/18/2023 5:26:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 3/18/2023 3:02:00 PM
"The Wolf's Pockets".
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 3/18/2023 3:02:00 PM
https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/the_wolfs_pockets_1158749
Date: 3/18/2023 9:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. An amazing write. Thanks for the added note at the bottom. Sometimes cut/run is the best thing to do. People can be very hurtful. Have a very blessed day/weekend....................
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/18/2023 3:36:00 PM
You and Shakespeare have it right. The ones you love can hurt you the most. I have never understood this and guess I never will..............  A writer is born to write and must never stop. Yes, take a break to get rejuvenated and find more creativity. Write On............. Enjoy your weekend writing away...........................
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 3/18/2023 2:44:00 PM
Thank you Paula. My take on it. It’s ironic that sometimes the people you’d take a bullet for are the ones who pull the trigger. Shakespeare had it down pat, “though those that are betray’d do feel the treason sharply, yet the traitor stands in worse case of woe”.
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 3/18/2023 2:44:00 PM
A comrad of mine used the word Machevallian, quite possibly this suits the flavour of survival. I’ve observed that betrayal sometimes is necessary to unite us. Some write because they want to. Some write because they have to. When the writing ceases, you may as well have weighted your pockets with stones and walked into a river, or left the gas stove on with the doors and windows closed, or sat in a bathtub and let the life run out of you, swallowed a bullet, or used that last piece of skipping rope. So you continue to write and from that perhaps is birthed the best from the worst of you. My opinion on the subject. Of course, to follow the course of action confronting you before the writing, and seeing it through, would leave you lost in the Bardo forever, which in itself can be a form of hell.
Date: 3/18/2023 6:58:00 AM
Oh, this is fabulous! Congratulations on POTD! :)
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 3/18/2023 2:39:00 PM
It has its merits. Thank you.
Date: 3/18/2023 6:47:00 AM
Back with warmest congratulations on POTD, LL
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 3/18/2023 2:42:00 PM
Merci. "Without an opportunity, their abilities would have been wasted, and without their abilities, the opportunity would have arisen in vain." I've been reading up on Machiavelli.
Date: 3/18/2023 6:21:00 AM
Congrats on doing this POTD. You present such a variegated perspective. Thank you for this.
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 3/18/2023 2:42:00 PM
Some might say warped. Thank you Ms. Feeley.
Date: 3/16/2023 9:37:00 PM
Shhh ~ silence please, as I mark this as a fav
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 3/16/2023 9:47:00 PM
https://youtu.be/4KzFe50RQkQ
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 3/16/2023 9:46:00 PM
merci bar coop
Date: 3/16/2023 2:57:00 PM
"I put this moment here..."
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 3/16/2023 2:57:00 PM
https://youtu.be/Mgwz1JBon2E
Date: 3/16/2023 1:08:00 PM
Oh, Lady, this will have to be a keeper. Every line a forever moment. I can't work out how to answer your comment on my short stories. So grateful for your interest! They have been taken from a book by the same name- on kindle/au as Marguerite: a Letter, I think. There are lots more in it but my energy is too low to do more. You walk a fine line; take care! Elizabeth
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 3/16/2023 2:49:00 PM
Thank you Elizabeth. Many walk a fine line in this life...the important act, is to walk your own line. Some lines are straight and true, others not so. We all meet up at the same place eventually, for good review and not so good.
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 3/16/2023 2:48:00 PM
I especially liked your poem Delmore. It transported me to another's world, both yours and his. I wonder what drew you to Delmore. Your energy pulses through your poems, especially your short stories. This writer has great respect for your life and work. The Marguerite stories most beautiful and enriching.
Date: 3/16/2023 7:13:00 AM
Ludovico Einaudi - 85mm (Visualizer)
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 3/16/2023 7:14:00 AM
https://youtu.be/_94Tegz87EQ

Book: Reflection on the Important Things