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Not So True

I sent my love a red heart, Declaring my love so true. His angry wife returned it. "Hands off!! He is mine". For contest 3 way tie for no. 1 won.

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/22/2011 11:48:00 AM

Congratulations Joyce on your win in Francine Robert's contest "Red". Love, Carol

Jan Camille Tongco

Date: 2/5/2011 9:17:00 PM

Really like this one, it made me laugh. Congratulations on your win, Joyce. ^_^

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/5/2011 12:01:00 AM

this is funny and cute, Joyce. Hope you are well. I suppose I need to get to sleep. Lots to do tomorrow. Congrats on your win. Luv, Andrea

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/4/2011 5:26:00 PM

You're right! This contest ended way too fast, but you still came out on top, Joyce. It looks like Catie's Clerihew contest is filling fast too. The short verse forms seem to do that. Congrats again! Love, Carolyn

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/4/2011 5:09:00 PM

Joyce, congratulations on your win. You have great descriptiveness and rhyming in this entry.

Kory Calhoun

Date: 2/4/2011 2:44:00 PM

LOL! Hi Joyce - Ooops...you're in BIG trouble now! LOL! Congratulations on your great WIN in Francine's contest. Best wishes, KC

Kash Poet

Date: 2/4/2011 12:40:00 PM

This is really humorous !! Congrats Joyce on your well deserved 1st place win---kashinath

James Fraser

Date: 2/4/2011 11:05:00 AM

Awesome Joyce and well said. Many many congrats for being top of the tree. Have a wonderful weekend....:)

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 2/4/2011 10:07:00 AM

Hello Joyce, This is wonderful! Congratulations on this well deserved FIRST place. So witty and funny, I love it! As Always, Shar

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/4/2011 9:52:00 AM

First place for a first-class poem, Joyce. Way to go, girl. So happy for you. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/4/2011 9:05:00 AM

Love it....and love the humor!!! Hooray for you Joyce!! 1st place winning poem!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/4/2011 8:02:00 AM

Congrats Joyce on your first place win in the RED contest with this exciting entry my friend.. so nice to share first place with the best .. enjoy with luv..

Tahera Mannan

Date: 2/4/2011 6:48:00 AM

hahaha. Many congratulations for this success.

John Freeman

Date: 2/4/2011 6:04:00 AM

God to see you at the top Joyce, Enjoy. Agape, Moses

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/4/2011 1:25:00 AM

oohlalala... congats on garnering top place, dear joyce..:) huggs, nette

Francine Roberts

Date: 2/3/2011 11:24:00 PM

congrats Joyce on your first place win in my contest, almost spit out my coffee reading this one, love it to pieces

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 2/1/2011 11:51:00 AM

Very nice Dodoitsu...good luck in the contest...Jimmy

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/1/2011 10:56:00 AM

Oh, that's a good one, Joyce. I'm sure Francine will enjoy it too! Very funny and I can imagine she was quite embarrassed! Best wishes in the contest, Love, Carolyn