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Not So True

I sent my love a red heart,
Declaring my love so true.
His angry wife returned it.
"Hands off!! He is mine".










For contest 3 way tie for no. 1 won.

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Carol Sunshine Brown

February 22, 2011 at 11:48 AM

Congratulations Joyce on your win in Francine Robert's contest "Red". Love, Carol

Jan Camille Tongco

February 5, 2011 at 9:17 PM

Really like this one, it made me laugh. Congratulations on your win, Joyce. ^_^

Andrea Dietrich

February 5, 2011 at 12:01 AM

this is funny and cute, Joyce. Hope you are well. I suppose I need to get to sleep. Lots to do tomorrow. Congrats on your win. Luv, Andrea

Carolyn Devonshire

February 4, 2011 at 5:26 PM

You're right! This contest ended way too fast, but you still came out on top, Joyce. It looks like Catie's Clerihew contest is filling fast too. The short verse forms seem to do that. Congrats again! Love, Carolyn

Robert Pettit

February 4, 2011 at 5:09 PM

Joyce, congratulations on your win. You have great descriptiveness and rhyming in this entry.

Kory Calhoun

February 4, 2011 at 2:44 PM

LOL! Hi Joyce - Ooops...you're in BIG trouble now! LOL! Congratulations on your great WIN in Francine's contest. Best wishes, KC

Kash Poet

February 4, 2011 at 12:40 PM

This is really humorous !! Congrats Joyce on your well deserved 1st place win---kashinath

James Fraser

February 4, 2011 at 11:05 AM

Awesome Joyce and well said. Many many congrats for being top of the tree. Have a wonderful weekend....:)

Sharon Ruebel

February 4, 2011 at 10:07 AM

Hello Joyce, This is wonderful! Congratulations on this well deserved FIRST place. So witty and funny, I love it! As Always, Shar

Carolyn Devonshire

February 4, 2011 at 9:52 AM

First place for a first-class poem, Joyce. Way to go, girl. So happy for you. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn

Carrie Richards

February 4, 2011 at 9:05 AM

Love it....and love the humor!!! Hooray for you Joyce!! 1st place winning poem!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

February 4, 2011 at 8:02 AM

Congrats Joyce on your first place win in the RED contest with this exciting entry my friend.. so nice to share first place with the best .. enjoy with luv..

Tahera Mannan

February 4, 2011 at 6:48 AM

hahaha. Many congratulations for this success.

John Freeman

February 4, 2011 at 6:04 AM

God to see you at the top Joyce, Enjoy. Agape, Moses

Nette Onclaud

February 4, 2011 at 1:25 AM

oohlalala... congats on garnering top place, dear joyce..:) huggs, nette

Francine Roberts

February 3, 2011 at 11:24 PM

congrats Joyce on your first place win in my contest, almost spit out my coffee reading this one, love it to pieces

Jimmy Anderson

February 1, 2011 at 11:51 AM

Very nice Dodoitsu...good luck in the contest...Jimmy

Carolyn Devonshire

February 1, 2011 at 10:56 AM

Oh, that's a good one, Joyce. I'm sure Francine will enjoy it too! Very funny and I can imagine she was quite embarrassed! Best wishes in the contest, Love, Carolyn

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