Not So True

I sent my love a red heart,
Declaring my love so true.
His angry wife returned it.
"Hands off!! He is mine".










For contest 3 way tie for no. 1 won.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 2/22/2011 11:48:00 AM
Congratulations Joyce on your win in Francine Robert's contest "Red". Love, Carol
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Date: 2/5/2011 9:17:00 PM
Really like this one, it made me laugh. Congratulations on your win, Joyce. ^_^
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Date: 2/5/2011 12:01:00 AM
this is funny and cute, Joyce. Hope you are well. I suppose I need to get to sleep. Lots to do tomorrow. Congrats on your win. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 2/4/2011 5:26:00 PM
You're right! This contest ended way too fast, but you still came out on top, Joyce. It looks like Catie's Clerihew contest is filling fast too. The short verse forms seem to do that. Congrats again! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/4/2011 5:09:00 PM
Joyce, congratulations on your win. You have great descriptiveness and rhyming in this entry.
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Date: 2/4/2011 2:44:00 PM
LOL! Hi Joyce - Ooops...you're in BIG trouble now! LOL! Congratulations on your great WIN in Francine's contest. Best wishes, KC
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Date: 2/4/2011 12:40:00 PM
This is really humorous !! Congrats Joyce on your well deserved 1st place win---kashinath
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Date: 2/4/2011 11:05:00 AM
Awesome Joyce and well said. Many many congrats for being top of the tree. Have a wonderful weekend....:)
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Date: 2/4/2011 10:07:00 AM
Hello Joyce, This is wonderful! Congratulations on this well deserved FIRST place. So witty and funny, I love it! As Always, Shar
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Date: 2/4/2011 9:52:00 AM
First place for a first-class poem, Joyce. Way to go, girl. So happy for you. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/4/2011 9:05:00 AM
Love it....and love the humor!!! Hooray for you Joyce!! 1st place winning poem!!
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Date: 2/4/2011 8:02:00 AM
Congrats Joyce on your first place win in the RED contest with this exciting entry my friend.. so nice to share first place with the best .. enjoy with luv..
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Date: 2/4/2011 6:48:00 AM
hahaha. Many congratulations for this success.
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Date: 2/4/2011 6:04:00 AM
God to see you at the top Joyce, Enjoy. Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/4/2011 1:25:00 AM
oohlalala... congats on garnering top place, dear joyce..:) huggs, nette
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Date: 2/3/2011 11:24:00 PM
congrats Joyce on your first place win in my contest, almost spit out my coffee reading this one, love it to pieces
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Date: 2/1/2011 11:51:00 AM
Very nice Dodoitsu...good luck in the contest...Jimmy
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Date: 2/1/2011 10:56:00 AM
Oh, that's a good one, Joyce. I'm sure Francine will enjoy it too! Very funny and I can imagine she was quite embarrassed! Best wishes in the contest, Love, Carolyn
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