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Not So Original Monoku Challenge

Peli the fish bandit steals lunch..complete.. with bill. penned 1. April 2016

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/10/2016 10:48:00 PM

Seren, clever monoku, Congrats on your Not So Original Monoku Challenge" LINDA

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/7/2016 8:03:00 PM

this truly was one of the best I read. Congrats, Seren.

Laura Leiser

Date: 4/7/2016 3:56:00 PM

Love the humor in this one, Seren! Congrats on your win :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/7/2016 3:21:00 PM

Your poem was awesome, creative and unique. You did a wonderful job with the topic “The Not So Original Monoku Challenge” ..Congratulations on your placement..Sara

Seren Roberts
Date: 4/7/2016 7:51:00 PM

Thank you Sara I do try most forms.... Seren

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 4/7/2016 2:53:00 PM

Congratulations Seren

Paul Callus

Date: 4/7/2016 12:51:00 PM

This monoku had all the attributes of a winner...glad to be back with congratulations, Seren! // paul

Seren Roberts
Date: 4/7/2016 7:49:00 PM

Thanks again Paul .......Seren

Hansteven Selfa

Date: 4/7/2016 9:24:00 AM

That's what I like about you Seren! You write great poems in any form! Congratulations on your spectacular win! I hope to see more of your works in the future! :) -HANS

Timothy Hicks

Date: 4/7/2016 2:41:00 AM

I think you might be a stalker .... you don't know how true this was! Peli really WAS trying to steal from a fisherman's fish bucket (but he never succeeded). Very funny and awesome wordplay (complete with bill) ... excellent! Congrats and thanks for participating in my contest!

Seren Roberts
Date: 4/7/2016 7:11:00 AM

Lol thx Tim glad you approved and placed me....Seren