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Not Romeo and Juilet

Not Romeo and Juliet Sea green, her eyes and long red hair that shone like bronze towards twilight. Her laughter, a peel of utter delight; In my mind she was Irish. She refused my adolescent passion I was too young for her. And I said: if you will not be my love I will join the merchant navy. It was winter, snow fell on the docks where the ship was moored, but she was not there to take farewell We met again when we both were middle aged, her eyes still green, but not as verdant as the sea. A melancholic smile, both married twice and we knew about regrets.

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Date: 3/18/2013 7:50:00 AM
Had she met you, would you each only have been married once?
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Jan Oskar Hansen
Date: 3/18/2013 10:38:00 AM
most likely not
Date: 3/18/2013 5:37:00 AM
moving...coming of age is painful, is it not?
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Jan Oskar Hansen
Date: 3/18/2013 6:49:00 AM
yes Victoria it is

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