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Not Moonlight Nor Starry Presence

Not moonlight nor lovely starry presence Of midnight can depress your young beauty Of splendour reflecting a radiance In your wealth of grandeur a swelling sea The passion you hug me with brings tremor The flowers you make bloom in my mad blood As your port in huge joy hits my breakers The brook down the blue slope cleansing all mud Envious night staring at the design Challenging Picasso's orange and blue Circles and angles that charmingly shine In you and me melting in fading view Our happy moon get smaller and smaller Scarlet vapour of hug let's still savour October 13, 2017

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Date: 10/16/2017 2:16:00 PM
Wow, a wonderful descriptive write, Probir.. luck in the contest Hugs dear friend ~`*
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Probir Gupta
Date: 10/17/2017 5:11:00 AM
Thank you, Eve ... but this is not for contest ...
Date: 10/14/2017 10:48:00 PM
Very romantic poem , that flows so well, great write!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 10/15/2017 12:43:00 AM
Thank you, Arthur ...
Date: 10/14/2017 9:50:00 PM
Wow an outstanding and gorgeous write Probir. Each and every line is luxuriant in imagery of passion and beauty with a tinge of sadness to add poignant depth to your masterfully written poem. Your couplet is completely captivating, a brilliant ending, and your sonnet is deserving of multiple reads.., again and again... Love it and a fav!!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 10/14/2017 10:43:00 PM
Thank you so much, Susan for your as usual encouraging remarks ...
Date: 10/13/2017 8:39:00 AM
Very well written Probir--I sense a bit of gloom--perhaps as intended!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 10/14/2017 10:43:00 PM
Thanks, Vijay ...

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