Not Lucky

"You're lucky to have a daughter like her"
No she was not lucky
She alone knows the number of ribs her body broke over the years
She alone knows the amount of water her skin pores shed
She alone knows the degree of burns her single heart hugged in secret. 
Her daughter is the result of her sacrificed life. 

"You're lucky to have graduated with excellent grades". 
No, she was not lucky. 
She alone knows the pain of missing classes for not clearing the dues. 
She alone knows how she managed her sore bruises while writing the tests. 
She alone knows how she bore the weight of humiliation, waiting for the day to show her worth. 
Her graduation is the result of her endurance. 

"You're lucky to have gone to such a big school"
No, she was not lucky. 
She alone knows how many unwanted hours she spent drilling in the boarding school. 
She alone felt the magnitude of loneliness, when no one clapped for her, in that big school. 
She alone knows the bulk of barrenness around her in the crowded PTA room. 
Her big-school education is the pathway to her forthcoming. 

"You're lucky to get an encouraging boss"
No, she was not lucky. 
She alone experienced the grave insult of being kicked out of the first project. 
She alone gulped the pain of losing her work credits to others. 
She got her own face smeared with soil before she could grow saplings out of it. 
Her now successful career is the outcome of crossing countless checks. 

"You're lucky to have an understanding partner". 
No, she was not lucky. 
She alone knows the quantum of struggle put into quelling trust issues. 
She alone can tell how many summers she sweated out to let things fall in place. 
She had to taste the awfulness in fulfilling her so-called unusual demand. 
Her now happy relationship is the resultant strive of both parties. 

You might relish juicy mangoes one day,
after growing a mango orchard with will and gay. 
If I say that it's all because of your luck,
Every single effort you put will remain dumb-struck. 

Nothing in life comes by luck. 
Nothing in life rests on good or bad times. 
Nothing in life dances to the tunes of stars and planets. 
Nothing in life is offered to you on silver plate. 

Don't say they're lucky, 
Say they're deserving.
Say they're unflagging.
Say they're equanimous. 
Say they're worthy. 

Because one day, you might not like 
listening to what you once said.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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Date: 5/9/2022 1:21:00 PM
An amazing write. Life is not easy. It is filled with tears. Have a great/blessed day writing away....................
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Date: 3/3/2022 8:45:00 AM
There is always the hidden side of the story; we never really know anyone else. Well penned!
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Date: 2/25/2022 5:45:00 PM
Honorable write, Swetha... enjoyed immensely!
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Date: 2/25/2022 7:54:00 AM
Yes, you earn your way with a lot of sacrifice. Yes, being married, there is love, but also strife; with trials and tribulations to keep a relationship going; some cannot bear. Well said, Swetha.
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Date: 2/24/2022 9:34:00 AM
An interesting and inspiring write Swetha...Enjoyed reading...Hugs...~ Ani
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Date: 2/24/2022 5:36:00 AM
I prefer God's grace combined with hard work, don't believe in luck, you have explained it well, Swetha:)
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Date: 2/24/2022 5:28:00 AM
It is strange how you interpret the word lucky - very much as I do, you are lucky to be going on holiday, your are lucky to have such a wonderful husband, you are lucky to have got your degrees, you are lucky to have such a nice house, I think the word lucky comes with a certain dose of envy, i am merely happy if others do more and have more, as I am content with what we have (my husband and I) and never say, I wish (Whatever) and wish we were like the Jones who have.......bla bla bla! Hugs JP
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Date: 2/22/2022 9:57:00 AM
She is not lucky, but wow is she ever worthy! Wow! This is a marvelous poem; an eye opener!
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Date: 2/21/2022 9:40:00 PM
Thank you, Swetha, for your thoughtful poem. There's no such thing as luck. Everything in life happens for a reason. Everyone in life has value. Be grateful for what you have and happy for blessings others receive. We know not the troubles they may have seen before they received their blessing. Well said my friend, Bill
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Date: 2/21/2022 8:26:00 PM
OK. Hard work - blood, sweat and tears - account for 98% of what we have and don't take to the grave... But how about 1% for Faith and 1% for pure 'Luck' -- though I prefer to call it 'a Star aligned favorably in the Heavens.' ~ Old Romantic
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