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Not Forgetting

Aimless footfalls traverse uncertain  unknown chilled concrete slabs stand marking down a memory murdered head down, heart defeated just a murmur weeps cross cutting the darkness a gasp in time holding on, as pain chokes out life left scattered on the bend where remembrance pretends smoldered embers still serenade painted dreams floating along in ecstasy left, to be alone drifting now off to the sea I'm getting naked tonight stripping myself bare undressing all my inhibitions disrobing all of this fear dropping in here with the innocent drenched in murky waters floating without a doubt cast aghast, not forgetting the past

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 1/6/2018 4:13:00 PM
This is a departure from your normally upbeat perspectives. You do dark justice. Well done Tim!
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Date: 1/5/2018 11:31:00 PM
I feel I have read this before! However a very beautiful poem!
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Date: 1/4/2018 5:32:00 PM
I enjoy deep poetry and yours is excellent. So so good! Hi Tim :)
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Date: 1/4/2018 3:47:00 PM
I love the metaphors in you fifth stanza Tim. Seems to be a fitting and cathartic necessity. A profound verse. ; )
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Date: 1/4/2018 1:11:00 PM
Very deep and frightening. Great write, as always!
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Date: 1/4/2018 12:10:00 PM
Deeply written expressive poem Tim. You have written some powerful lines in this one :)
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Date: 1/4/2018 11:27:00 AM
Chilling emotive poem, chilling in it's mental disrobing...fantastic piece Tim.
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