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Not Even An Hm

I stayed up all night writing a ditty One I really thought was quite witty When the results came in Yep, no placement, no win My rhyme and meter were shown no pity… For the Contest contest..

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/11/2015 10:20:00 PM

Barbara:) :) :) I smile at every entry in this contest, ... Congratulations, on your #1 placement. Always & Forever *LINDA*

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 1/11/2015 4:17:00 PM

Sorry Barbara,honey is always honey no matter what anybody may say;congrats on the win my friend...huggs

Eileen Manassian

Date: 1/10/2015 11:00:00 PM

I'm back to congratulate you on your win with this witty write, Barbara. :)

Sandra Haight

Date: 1/10/2015 8:20:00 PM

Very witty, Barbara! Congratulations on your win. Sandra

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/10/2015 8:09:00 PM

Big smile on my face Barbara! I loved the way you approached this contest and so did the judge. Congratulations on your wonderful win of first place!

Ilene Bauer

Date: 1/10/2015 5:23:00 PM

i like this one, barbara! congrats on your win...

Jan Allison

Date: 1/10/2015 1:50:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Barbara :-) Hugs Jan xxx

Robert Stoner Jr

Date: 1/10/2015 1:01:00 PM

well done on this fine poem, clear to the point fun read,I enjoyed it,congratulations on today's win

Casarah Nance

Date: 1/10/2015 10:47:00 AM

This is witty and a winner well done!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/10/2015 10:29:00 AM

Ha ha, short but oh so effective! Congratulations!

Earl Schumacker

Date: 1/10/2015 10:16:00 AM

Hi Barbara, I like a short poem that is cleverly crafted. This is that poem. Great job. I think "HM" must stand for "Humor Me" or "Holly Molly!"? I think of N/A as "Nice Arrangement" or "Noteworthy "A".... I could be wrong. Have a great week end. Take care. Earl

Barbara Gorelick
Date: 1/10/2015 10:35:00 AM

Maybe it stands for Horribly Miswritten...Thanks Earl..Your comment is funnier than my poem...Barbara

Edward Ebbs

Date: 1/10/2015 10:11:00 AM

Congrats :) BTW, you need your sleep :)

Barbara Gorelick
Date: 1/10/2015 10:34:00 AM

Thanks Ed. your right I do need more sleep...lol. Barbara

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/10/2015 9:22:00 AM

Nice poem with humor and wit, Congrats, Barbara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/26/2014 9:51:00 PM

hope it was not in one of mine, dearie, but yep, sometimes I am a hard taskmaster with rhymes and meter myself!! I think some judges are too HM happy!!!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/25/2014 11:00:00 PM

Everyone gets HM's in my contest...LOL...JK... Barbara,, Stopping by to say hi, and wish you the best... Enjoy your days and the coming New Year. Love ~LINDA~