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Norman, Don't Be Bates

Halloween is very near, Stealing is what brought me here, Where I'm going I can't say, I just had to get away. Driving in the pouring rain, Those that do, must be insane, Looking for a hideaway, To spend my holiday. I've been good, but not that great, Candy makes me put on weight, Pumpkin pie and room for dates, But Norman, don’t be Bates. Shower time defeats the gloom, Norman gets to pick the room, Dreamers dream, of what is not, But water, please be hot. Suddenly, as in a flash, I resemble corn beef hash, As I fall, the music dies, Just before, my spirit flies. Now my shower scene is through, For my head and shoulders too, Halloween is for my mates, But Norman, don’t be Bates. Though my crime was unconfessed, Norman likes me for a guest, Double wrongs, don't make a right, Don't forget the light. Though my life is not to be, Murder loves a mystery, Who was killed, and who was cuffed, When Norman's mom was stuffed. If you like to trick or treat, Bate's Motel is on your street, Monsters loom where Heaven waits, But Norman, don't be Bates. Norman Bates, it seems to me, You made shower history, Mother made you do the crime, Nice of you, to do the time. You exist, in memory, Mother keeps you company, Don't forget, the love she gave, Each time, you rob, her grave. Meditate, for inner peace, When you kill, upon release, We exist, in altered states, But Norman, don't be Bates.

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Date: 10/18/2024 1:27:00 AM
great poem, congratulations
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Date: 10/16/2024 9:18:00 PM
A fun and entertaining take here. The rhythm and rhyme are very catchy. You did a wonderful job on this one Bryan; a humorous twist on an old classic!! Well done. Congrats on your finish!!
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Date: 10/16/2024 5:31:00 PM
Bryan! This is so cool and cute!! I couldn't resist this and it stuck with me for days! References to the classic horror film with the main character Norman Bates was both funny and creepy! But add the chipmunks melody and i had too much fun reading this! Who says the horror genre can't have humor?! Think of Broadway horror and you see what i mean! Tysm for sharing this with us and I'll contact you soon about your prize! Congratulations! Xoxo-Crystol
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Bryan Norton
Date: 10/16/2024 6:19:00 PM
Yes, I've sang the song many times, and watched the movie too. Thank you for the placement among the talented group. Norman was always kind of funny and creepy, in his way. "Norman Bates, it seems to me, you made shower history, Mother made you do the crime, nice of you, to do the time. Meditate, for inner peace, when you kill, upon release, we exist, in altered states, but Norman, don't be Bates." Indeed! Thanks again, Bryan
Date: 10/5/2024 5:51:00 AM
Wow! In this one, it is important to know the story first. When you do the suspense “kills.” Great title and refrain.
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Bryan Norton
Date: 10/5/2024 7:59:00 PM
Hi, Kim Another silly poem. Fun to write. Thanks Kim, for reading. Sincerely, Norman Bates
Date: 10/5/2024 5:49:00 AM
Interesting, quirky write you penned here Bryan. Yeah, let's keep anyone with that name at a good distance
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Bryan Norton
Date: 10/5/2024 8:07:00 PM
Thanks for reading, Tom. Don't worry, I think Norman died in prison a long time ago. Take care, Bryan

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