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nonetheless -

I sigh …
pushing warm, wordless weight
onto the twilight mist
where its folly hangs like old sackcloth
the silver-doubloon moon dripping
it’s wan wonder to daub
breath and bones alike with
rusted romance -
a languid lie that loves to tease -
that lives to clutch my
heart in its chill digits and wring
each memory from my gut
cackling all the while
at the dreamy stain left behind -
the trail of crumbs and lost loves that
fools as I devour in the
ignorance of age …
the barren bones that lesser creatures
pass by in apathy
and greater creatures choke on …

I am boundless in my longing
this breeze of brine boils my marrow
beads of moonlight spatter
wave-tops as if alive -
as if each silver burst was a
note of child laughter
skipping away to find a tympan, sweet
or a moony firefly of singular purpose
now there - now gone …
each, lives the life of an instant
yet is a glorious bloom
of magic and timeless grace
that reaches its
tendrils deep into my essence …

that, with this salty air and
cool sand and rhythmic washing
of the shore
speaks to me in a
voice as clear as the gods themselves
a voice that calls to the
most visceral reaches of my spirit
a tender voice of hope and life
and dreams and AWE …
a voice of dazzling wonderment
and tragic sorrow
a voice that trembles my bones
and stirs my heart with a
yearning and thirst, unquenchable
a voice … of deceit …

It sings to me yet -
beyond all sense and caring and
prudence and time proven
that you were the ONE …
it’s a voice that I
wish beyond all imaginings 
I would never hear again
but that nonetheless continues on
and finds me inexorably
bound to this place
to that devil moon
to this limitless sea
and …
to YOU.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 1/29/2022 12:12:00 PM
This poem is so beautifully written! You have a wonderful way with words.
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Date: 1/24/2022 8:47:00 PM
I wish I could write like this... and I mean that in the most complimentary sense. One word from your poem describes how I feel about it... AWE. Please keep stoking the flames of whatever muse inspired this. Fav.
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Date: 1/24/2022 11:09:00 AM
This is so beautiful and powerful, Gregory. I found it on Best New Poems, where it deserves to be.
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Date: 1/22/2022 1:38:00 AM
So detailed and brilliant, Greg. You never disappoint when it comes to perfection...Love this! Wishing you well my friend. -Charlie
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Date: 1/12/2022 7:30:00 AM
My friend your poetry paints such awesomely beautiful imagery combined with the depths that sends this mind wondering and pondering. A fav, a true and very bright gem God bless.
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Date: 1/11/2022 4:32:00 PM
This is excellent, Greg! Beautiful language and imagery. Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 1/10/2022 6:34:00 AM
I enjoyed your poem. Great imagery. Congratulations on your winning placement.
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Date: 1/10/2022 5:10:00 AM
Great writing. Congratulations!
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Date: 1/10/2022 2:55:00 AM
Brilliant write, as is usual with your poetry. I am blessed to read such beauty in words. Grace and light fall from your pen. You amaze me once again. God bless you always. Love, Gina - OH... and Congrats on the top win
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Date: 1/8/2022 10:47:00 AM
Your free verse excel like no other Greg. I hope you are well. New year blessings xxoo
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Date: 12/30/2021 3:54:00 PM
Now this is really spectacular, Greg:-) Gotta fave it!
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Date: 12/30/2021 3:32:00 PM
awesome write :)
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Date: 12/29/2021 10:38:00 PM
Really strong images throughout, Greg, it pulls the reader deep within, as is the intent, well framed:)
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