Non Stop

Relentless rain Over abundant Cold monotony Blurring seasons Droopy blossoms Soggy gardens Diluting summer.

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Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/28/2012 4:22:00 PM

i know you love flowers and hope the buds dolt drown, joyce... this is a winning piece; solid, picturesque work.. congrats on your win in my contest, you parlor queen, dear friend!..:) huggs!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/28/2012 3:08:00 PM

I hope that you get all the rain that you need..We are needing some again..It is dry here again..I thought we might get some out of the hurricane but we did not get a drop...Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/28/2012 12:04:00 PM

Beautiful poem Joyce. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Jack Horne

Date: 6/28/2012 8:29:00 AM

Loved this one, Joyce - I could almost feel that rain! Here, in England, we certainly get plenty of rain too, lol. Congrats on your wins : )

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/28/2012 8:23:00 AM

superb expressions creating a prfect picture of intense rain.. good luck in ontst Joyce.. I just did a new blog on Constance.. I spoke to her last night briefly.. she is in good spirits.. will be home after July 6th.. no she had a stone in her one kidney.. she only has one .. not a transplant ..she had given her good kidney to her brother several years ago to save his life.. she will be returnng soon.. our luv to Carolyn ..so sorry she is so ill..

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/27/2012 9:43:00 AM

you've painted a scene of both inward and outward musings, joyce, and with such beauty within the words... :) hugggs!

Ilene Bauer

Date: 6/27/2012 4:53:00 AM

we're not experiencing that in my part of the country, but you've described your weather and frustration very well here!

Debbie Duncan

Date: 6/26/2012 9:54:00 PM

Oh I like this,,,, very nice,,,, have a blessed day Joyce ;}