Nocturnum

Nocturnum
We lie beneath the slowly waning moon, Her sharp shape emerging like a fine fang, Metamorphosed from the bright afternoon And now -- upon a thread, the night does hang. Our deepest, darkest desires are revealed -- They are vampires -- hellish creatures of night Like Satan within Lucifer concealed He was said to be quite a pretty sight. Let not the purging light of day within Your lace curtains and silk bed sheets of sin To mar your moonlit skin, your pallid skin. This bed welcomes our death like a coffin. Is it not a fair sentence for our crime? Lasting ‘til the bittersweet end of time.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
June 6, 2019 at 7:11 AM
Powerful imagery, Diana. Wonderful penning. Welcome to PoetrySoup. Hope you will participate in the contests.
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October 18, 2018 at 5:51 AM
Your writing is sooo wonderful, Diana!!! Keep up the good work
Am Avatar
October 18, 2018 at 3:46 PM
Thank you, I am glad that you enjoyed my poem!
Gondolf Avatar
October 14, 2018 at 10:29 AM
Wonderful imagery in this well written sonnet, Diana, I enjoyed reading it. welcome to Poetry Soup. John
Am Avatar
October 18, 2018 at 3:46 PM
Thank you, John!
Orozco Avatar
October 13, 2018 at 12:17 PM
A very nice write.. the images .. nicely done!
Am Avatar
October 18, 2018 at 3:43 PM
Thank you very much!
Ajmal Avatar
September 29, 2018 at 7:22 AM
Ahh, I absolutely love reading this wonderful poem of yours and especially the imagery you have put in it, everything about this poem was perfect, I wish you a really warm welcome here on poetrysoup, good luck and have a really nice day
Am Avatar
October 5, 2018 at 9:15 PM
Thank you so much!
Krutsinger Avatar
September 25, 2018 at 9:14 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup Diana. I like the "deepest darkest desires revealed, vampires - hellish creatures of the night" a lot! Terrific imagery.
Am Avatar
September 25, 2018 at 4:11 PM
Thank you very much!
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