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Nocturnum

Nocturnum
We lie beneath the slowly waning moon, Her sharp shape emerging like a fine fang, Metamorphosed from the bright afternoon And now -- upon a thread, the night does hang. Our deepest, darkest desires are revealed -- They are vampires -- hellish creatures of night Like Satan within Lucifer concealed He was said to be quite a pretty sight. Let not the purging light of day within Your lace curtains and silk bed sheets of sin To mar your moonlit skin, your pallid skin. This bed welcomes our death like a coffin. Is it not a fair sentence for our crime? Lasting ‘til the bittersweet end of time.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 6/6/2019 7:11:00 AM
Powerful imagery, Diana. Wonderful penning. Welcome to PoetrySoup. Hope you will participate in the contests.
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Date: 10/18/2018 5:51:00 AM
Your writing is sooo wonderful, Diana!!! Keep up the good work
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Date: 10/18/2018 3:46:00 PM
Thank you, I am glad that you enjoyed my poem!
Date: 10/14/2018 10:29:00 AM
Wonderful imagery in this well written sonnet, Diana, I enjoyed reading it. welcome to Poetry Soup. John
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Date: 10/18/2018 3:46:00 PM
Thank you, John!
Date: 10/13/2018 12:17:00 PM
A very nice write.. the images .. nicely done!
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Date: 10/18/2018 3:43:00 PM
Thank you very much!
Date: 9/29/2018 7:22:00 AM
Ahh, I absolutely love reading this wonderful poem of yours and especially the imagery you have put in it, everything about this poem was perfect, I wish you a really warm welcome here on poetrysoup, good luck and have a really nice day
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Date: 10/5/2018 9:15:00 PM
Thank you so much!
Date: 9/25/2018 9:14:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup Diana. I like the "deepest darkest desires revealed, vampires - hellish creatures of the night" a lot! Terrific imagery.
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Date: 9/25/2018 4:11:00 PM
Thank you very much!

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