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Dim The gloss Of night’s sketch, While musings pale From charcoal traces-- As flitting vignettes etch Time’s priceless remembrances When fond joyfulness gripped our hands-- Until your whims smudged dreams blossoming Then l e a v e me naked ... with still life’s playbacks. ....................... Writing Challenge 2- April 2019- Its All About 10 Sponsor: Dear Heart 4/27/2019

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Date: 5/6/2019 10:43:00 AM
Nette, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this beautifully penned piece. I love the image too!
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Date: 5/5/2019 1:06:00 PM
As predicted, another great nette winner. Congrats! :) gw
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Date: 5/1/2019 10:02:00 PM
Challenge met, topped, exceeded---and blown off of the radar. Enchanting etheree, sure to be seen with the winner's garland 'round its neck soon. B'yootiful! Best wishes, Gershon
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Date: 4/30/2019 11:49:00 AM
Artwork and words, Nette. Wonderful. The poem was a pleasure to read.
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Date: 4/27/2019 11:28:00 PM
Gorgeous write, Nette, and not an easy form ... great stuff, my friend - keep up the wonderful work! :-) <3
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Date: 4/27/2019 7:06:00 AM
Nostalgic images are etched on my mind!
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Date: 4/27/2019 1:54:00 AM
this is so good nette, a masterpiece of verse. Tom
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Date: 4/27/2019 12:38:00 AM
'When fond joyfulness gripped our hands...' great line. As always, Nette, your words hang with a masterful delicacy.
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Date: 4/26/2019 6:55:00 PM
You described the picture perfectly...All the best
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