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How can a love, When it fits like a glove, Go from a quarrel to end? Well, it sometimes unravels When one of you travels, And loneliness seeks out a friend. If I'd only known That you weren't my own, I might have remembered to hold The hours of sand That seeped through my hand, Instead of the glass, ever cold. See, I then believed That my absence was grieved, My return given weight I thought due, Yet I didn't grasp Your needs with a clasp That endeavored our bond to be true. Beleaguered, I left, A house then bereft Of solid endowment below, Those words, in attack, We can never take back, Like arrows set loose from a bow. 'Tis said, when apart, That heart longs for heart, And absence will winnow the fires, But when I returned, The embers that burned, Were guaranteed only to liars. I must now intend That I destined to end, The breath of my proxy, in rage, But the voice of a child At once calmed the wild, And let loose my ire from its cage. I wish I could blame, But I did the same, And sold you on stories divine, Yes, you spun some fables, But were just turning tables, As I set the standard with mine. Now I look back, anon, At the life that is gone ... 'Twas a sad lover's quarrel, though just, But a house built of size On a bedrock of lies, Is a foundation best turned to dust. You see, lies that are lost, Always bring a high cost, And we both kept a share of that quarry, But I hold naught but mirth, And for what it is worth, From the depths of my heart ... I AM sorry. ** TENTH PLACE in the "Lover's Quarrel Poetry Contest", Lewis Reynes, Sponsor **

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Date: 3/14/2017 9:28:00 AM
Well done Greg. Congrats on your placement in the contest. Nice job with the rhyme scheme and cadence....and the torment of lies...
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/22/2017 1:37:00 AM
Thanks so much, John ... greatly appreciated, my friend!
Date: 3/14/2017 1:39:00 AM
I like this very much. Well done Greg!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/22/2017 1:36:00 AM
Thank you so much, Erina ... that's very sweet of you! :-)
Date: 3/9/2017 11:05:00 AM
Love the AABCCB rhyme it is very melodic and evokes a lot of emotion, I think I will try it out, I really like this one! Should do well in the contest!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/13/2017 9:06:00 PM
Thank so much, John - I'm going to use this again - it was an enjoyable rhythm to write in. I could NOT find a name or label for it, but I'm sure it's been widely used.
Date: 3/8/2017 1:08:00 AM
I love this rhyme, it should be something you could choose here, I like to use it too. One of the names appears to be Kipling-rhyme. Very emotional poem, and a GREAT one for the contest. Good luck!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/13/2017 9:08:00 PM
Thanks a lot, Darren - it was a fun rhyme to write in, I'm going to use it again. Thanks so much for your comment, my friend!
Date: 3/6/2017 11:49:00 AM
I really, really like this. Deep thoughts delivered succinctly in full emotion. You done good! The dramatic pain, so intense, is apparent. Good luck in the contest and all else ... CayCay
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/13/2017 9:13:00 PM
Thank you very much, CayCay - your opinion is important to me, as I admire and value your work ... Heartache is never fun to visit, but imagine how little we poets would have to write about without it. ;-) Thanks again, my friend - blessings!

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