No Undies

jeans and a tee shirt 
vivid imagination
undressed by his eyes
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Jones Avatar
March 26, 2024 at 6:24 AM
A great senryu! Love this.
Lamoureux Avatar
March 27, 2024 at 5:31 AM
Thanks Karen.
Faulkner Avatar
September 8, 2023 at 12:33 PM
When I saw the title, just had to check it out, and it did not disappoint, very witty :)
Lamoureux Avatar
October 18, 2023 at 9:50 AM
Thanks Michelle.
Manassian Avatar
September 5, 2023 at 11:04 PM
OH! This is a cheeky write. ;) The imagination runs wild indeed!
Lamoureux Avatar
September 7, 2023 at 7:09 AM
;0) Thanks.
Baker Avatar
September 5, 2023 at 6:42 AM
Thought-provoking Senryu, Richard. Sometimes the imagination leads to realization; therein lies the mystery, Thanks for sharing your thoughts through your poetry. Have a great day! Bill
Lamoureux Avatar
September 5, 2023 at 4:04 PM
Thanks Bill.
Lawless Avatar
September 4, 2023 at 6:00 AM
The world has become an endless game of "show don't tell"
Lamoureux Avatar
September 4, 2023 at 6:12 AM
A good play on words.
Puddifoot Avatar
September 3, 2023 at 8:14 AM
i like ;) (i'd call it a sexy senryu though)
Lamoureux Avatar
September 3, 2023 at 11:02 AM
You are indeed correct. Thanks for your visit.
Poet Avatar
September 3, 2023 at 8:03 AM
Richard you painted a breathtaking picture of jeans and a tee shirt, as if they were being undressed by his eyes, revealing a world of vivid imagination.
Lamoureux Avatar
September 3, 2023 at 11:03 AM
Thanks buddy.
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